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Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from lunalurker
Review:
Amusing, entertaining, and a nice alternate view of the main story. Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I rather like writing things from Richard's view. Thanks for reviewing
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
I do not think that word means what he thinks it means. Great job, please continue.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I need to advance the story a bit more for the next chapter to be written, but I think it will be a doozy.

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Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
As Rose's first Doctor would say, "FANTASTIC!!"

Can't wait for more.

James
Comments from author:
Thank you. Hope it ends better than for him...

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Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Black Mother Blues" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Nice

James
Comments from author:
Thank you. This story is primarily to explain things I didn't want to reveal too soon.

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Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer Trade Off" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Nice start. Do I sense a Princess Bride fan?

James
Comments from author:
Thank you. Me? Inconceivable.

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Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [12 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from RebeccaAshling
Review:
Firstly, let me get a little something out of my system. Um, Mr Wilkins, sir? YOU KEEP USING THAT WORD. I DON'T THINK IT MEANS WHAT YOU THINK IT MEANS!

I found the Mayor's increasing vexation to be highly amusing and hope to see more of it. Never liked the smarmy bastard. Joyce's Mother power really seems to be putting the skids to his plans. When she's actually trained in her power... O.O

I'm piqued by Edna Mae. A story about her, one day?
Comments from author:
Heh. I think I found a common denominator for everyone on this site...

The Mother power is exceptioanlly invidous. Add to that the power of a Warren Witch... One cranky Mayor. A story about Edna Mae? Hmm... Now you've inspired me... At least, a story in which she will appear.

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Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from borgrabbit
Review:
A brand of contraceptives: 'INCONCEIVABLE!'

From a monolog by George Carlin.

Great story! And explanation of some of Rowan's background.
Comments from author:
Heh. I'd forgotten about that one. THanks for reminding me.

Yes, there will not be a lot more. Not very exciting sitting in a gem for 15 years.

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Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from PATM
Review:
I wonder if he knows what inconceivable means; paraphrased from Princess Bride. Aside from that I found the Kendra rescue event at last. Nice wrap up of events time line. Is this the actual rescue or is there another chapter/story with a more linear description. I loved this compilation from evils pov.
Comments from author:
Yup, he does. HasnĀ“t seen the movie though. Well, it was only up for short while. I admit to not posting it earlier to keep Rowan under wraps a bit longer... This is about it. Though Kendra will speak of her experiences.Thanks for reviewing
Review By [PATM] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from Eureka
Review:
Good backstory.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I felt it needed some. Richard is hard to write in LS proper.
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Review By [Eureka] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from Blackett
Review:
This was great, but it was to be expected. Anything else from your part would've been ....inconceivable :D
Comments from author:
Heh. Thank you, I'm honoured.
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Review By [Blackett] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from etienneofthewestwind
Review:
Love the insight into Wilkins and the backstory on recent Lonely Souls revelations.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I thought it would clarify things. Not everything, just things. ;-)
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Review By [etienneofthewestwind] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Ooh such a nasty Richard! Congratulations - you seem to have a disturbing knack for getting inside the head of a truly vile character :)
Comments from author:
It takes a bit of practice, but then you never want to go back... MUHAHAHAHAHA

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Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from Wormbait
Review:
Very nice.

Poor Richard, things are slipping out of his control faster and faster, no one has any respect for true Evil anymore :)

Well done and thanks for sharing. Now I have to go watch The Princess Bride again. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. No one respects the Mayor who wants to ascend! And I feel untroubled about the PRincess Bride. THat is what set this off after all...


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Review By [Wormbait] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from shazamfan
Review:
WOW! Seeing things from the Mayor's point of view was even more amazing that I had hoped it would be and shed a little light on things happening in Lonely Souls.

-J-
Comments from author:
Yes, he sees things just a little differently from other people...
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Review By [shazamfan] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fire in the Hall" from DofEire
Review:
Ah, Dick, how thou dost live up to thy name...I did like the happy little trees comment though. =)
Comments from author:
Tricky Dick for ever! Yeah, Bob Ross rules.


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Review By [DofEire] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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