Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Very nicely done. I may not be familiar with the song, but the way you portray Yami is one that gives us a look at him that few are used to. He can be a powerful ally or a dangerous foe, depending on how you treat him and his friends.
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Review By [Harry
] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]