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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Interesting. However you did get something wrong in the end, Harry is a second year when Runes are not yet a class that he can take when Ginny is taken into the chamber so he still has the option to take that class the next year.
Comments from author:
Good point. And it will undoubtedly be a class he'll be very avidly participating in since who knows what use it will be in his future.
Review By [twlight] • Date [31 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
Review:
Short but sweet!
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [24 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TharzZzDunN
Review:
Ha! Now there's a game breaker for both queens on the chessboard!

Cheers~!
Comments from author:
The breaker is really for the PTB's plans, not the Scoobies'. ;-)
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from thundernaruto
Review:
Great chapter Update soon
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the story, but I'm not really sure where I could take this in the canon HP-verse, since, with Harry's new empowerment, any battle against Voldemort would be more like a curb-stomp.
Review By [thundernaruto] • Date [25 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Interesting. I figured out what was going on the second he fell into the room with the cane. What I can't figure out is what it was supposed to be doing there.
Comments from author:
Good question. Obviously, Loki or one of his minions hid it there, in an effort to forestall Thor's eventual return.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PsychoWing
Review:
Oh, I absolutely love this. And the idea of Harry having Thor's powers? I'd love to read more of it.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story.

And basically, with the physical abilities and power levels Harry now possesses, any so-called 'battle' with Timmy-Boy would be a curb-stomp lasting less than a couple seconds.

Of course, if my muse decides otherwise, you might see something more show up at any time.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [23 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Now that would have put a twist in many other peoples' plans. Another great opening for a crossover.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

And yes, Harry's new enhancements are probably going to play havoc with the way that Dumbledore and others had anticipated future events would develop. ;-)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Curb stomp on the bad guys in three... two... one....
Comments from author:
Actually, there's not even enough of a possible contest potential to call it a curb stomp. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ThunderGod
Review:
I want to marry your muse....recced because its Awesome
Comments from author:
Thanks. And I'll pass along the proposal. ;-)
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
well... that sure was different...
I`m very glad that Harry manages to defeat the basilisk with this new power...
it would be interesting to read more of this story to see what happens after the Chamber ^_^
Comments from author:
Any follow-up is entirely up to my muse's whims. Glad you enjoyed the story. ;-)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dazeddan
Review:
ohh the look on toms face when he walks around the corner......priceless
Comments from author:
Yeah, that would be a lot of fun to see. ;-)
Review By [dazeddan] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from winddancer
Review:
Cool!! A different take on the story about the Chamber of Secrets. It would be nice if musey pick up on this but a one shot is good too. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for reviewing. ;-)
Review By [winddancer] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cateagle
Review:
Oh, my!! Beautiful adaptation of Marvel's origin story for Thor and I daresay this is going to cause immeasurable headaches for a lot of folk, not limited to Tom, Albus, and Cornelius (methinks Lucius Malfoy may want to reconsider a number of decisions and direct Draco to grow up and behave better). In any case, I'd love to see more of this one and the chaos this event sequence could cause.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story.

And while Harry's new situation would undoubtedly cause a lot of problems for a lot of people, my just doesn't seem very interested in doing anything more with it at the moment.

Maybe that will change, maybe it won't. Just have to wait and see.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
Review:
Really would like to see Harry keep the Thunder God under wraps, maybe only let Hermione know after getting a promise from her not to tell /anyone/ else.She can help translate the Runes, plus whatever else they find in th Chamber on their return... because the idea that Harry never went back down there after any possible weapon/knowledge/peace and quiet is one of JKR's /many/ plot chasms...

Be interesting to see how this would affect Harry in the upcoming years, too... Third Year, Harry 'accidentally' blows up and the lightning strikes hit poor Aunt Marge as harry flees Dursleystan Gulag, and he adopts the scrawny mutt he runs into. Researching more about the Norse Pantheon now that he's free of the Order, the Dursleys, etc, and getting Hermione to check out the normal mythologies, while he wanders around in his Thor persona after getting new outfits for both forms...

Hey, Grey Writer Of Excellence, want to try something like this?
Comments from author:
Interesting ideas. Maybe my muse will pay attention and use them, or maybe she won't. It's entirely up to her, and she's got me working on some other stuff right now.
Review By [trongod] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from StriderMew
Review:
Ya know... I would prefer to read a longer story of this than that mess that became of joehundredaire's "Wand of Uru". Great job, I really liked it.... but now I am sad this one-shot is over....
Comments from author:
Haven't read that one yet.

Glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [StriderMew] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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