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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story and liked how Willow ended up being a Winchester as well. Nicely done.
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from calikocat
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So I absolutely love fics where Xander and Willow are siblings. ^^ And this is the most unique spin on that idea that I've seen so far. I seriously hope you're close to producing a sequel to this. I wanna see them on a road trip. XD
Review By [calikocat] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Mwhahahaha
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I like how you've made both Xander and Willow the son and daughter of John...you don't really see that much...
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from frankocsic
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enjoyed reading this. looking forward to the sequel, and hoping for more action then. good job.
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from JediKnight
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Interesting, but the timeline might have been better off at the start of chapter one. Also, no offense, but most of the story seemed like fluff or close to angst.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from umino
Review:
Interesting story. I'm sure the sequal will be very interesting. So many secrets between the groups.
Review By [umino] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from serenityselena
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awesome story...
interesting way of bringing the two worlds together....
I think they will be good for each other....
I`m sure that they will have some adventures during their road trip and they will surely encounter the supernatural along the way... their reactions should be very entertaining too...
can`t wait for the sequel ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from EllandrahSylver
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Based on the birthdates, for Xander and Willow to be in the same grade, either Xander was held back a year, or Willow was advanced... possibly starting kindergarten at 4. Which, interestingly, would mean that all three of the younger Winchesters are in the same grade... just out of tenth...

As for the rest, this was intersting and entertainng, and if you post a sequel, I will read it.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from msdarque
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I quite liked the story, interesting and surprising!
Eager to read the sequel.
Wonder how John, Dean and Sam react when they find out that Xander and Willow are rather familiar with the supernatural?
Congrats and kudos!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
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Poor adam. He's the only member of the family that really has no idea what's out there. Xander and Willow have at least spent the better part of a year in the know.

Can't wait for the Winchesters and the sunnydale duo to run into each other doing something supernatural related and trying to talk their way out of the sitch with out mentioning it.

I hope something happens that makes John, Dean and Sam tell the kids about the night life. I can see Adam freaking out and totally thinking his dad and older brothers are nuts while Xander and Willow just pull out holy water and stakes from their bags.

i really hope to see the sequel up soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Review By [yuiop] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from SlowMercury
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I definitely enjoyed this! Very interesting set-up; I liked how the road-trip just kept growing and growing.

One detail I particularly liked was the Winchesters' strong "family-us" and "them" attitudes -- how they only tolerated Willow because she was calming Xander down, and then after Dean broke into Willow's room, how Dean's automatic reaction was, "She won't need the friends as a substitute family anymore," which I can only guess will cause problems further down the line, considering how close Buffy is to the two of them, and how Giles really has filled the paternal role in their lives. (Although if Buffy is still head-tripping from her death at the Master's hands, she's probably not going to make a good impression on the Winchester clan.)

And the whole "keep them from the supernatural" thing seems like it's going to blow up in the most hilarious way possible.

Anyway, good job and I'm looking forward to finding out what comes next. :)
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from JonnyNapalm
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Very engaging and creative take on the Family dynamic for the BTVS/Supernatural crew. It'll be interesting to see what else you decide to do with these stories. Introducing the Winchesters to the aspects of the Hellmouth, Slayers, the many demons in the Whedon-verse that AREN'T evil (tragically since we already know how Dean will likely deal). And that's without mentioning Sam's psychic talents or Willow's natural aptitude for Magics. There's a lot of great material available to you in the storyline you've developed I'll be looking forward to seeing what you do with it.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from AlecMcDowell
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Crossover fics with Supernatural that are well done are great to read and this is certainly one of them. I like the caution on both sides as they try and digest the fact that they are family. Jess being not as bad as she appears on the surface was a lot of good, too. The only thing I didn't like was your claim on Xander and Sam looking alike. I'll be frank; they don't. If anything Xander looks like John, their hair is similar shades of dark brown and Xander keeps it short at this point in time as well, they both have brown eyes, and both are broad and the body type we see Xander grow into is much more similar to John's than it is Sam's.
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from mouse
Review:
Oh I want more please it was so good
I love that you made willow a part of the family too.
Can't wait for the sequal!
Review By [mouse] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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