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Review of chapter "Natasha Redux" from Telumiel
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Loved the story! And an extra thank you for introducing me to the great world of Red Star. After reading this, I went out and bought the reissued bound set. Having now read the source material, I would definitely say you did the world justice. Loved the OC cast as well.
Review By [Telumiel] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Natasha Redux" from DieselDriver
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I thought that Buffy and her would be together at the end when she said she wanted to go with Buffy. What happened to Buffy? Why aren't they together?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Zero Point Showdown" from DieselDriver
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In combat there is no such thing as cheating. Win and you live. Lose and you die. If it's real combat.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Some more pictures and a bit on Telekinesis" from DieselDriver
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I looked at Red Star on Amazon and it's $6.81 for a used paperback plus $3.99 shipping. May not seem like much but it'll have to wait until next month.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome 2" from DieselDriver
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I just want you to know, the source material for the fan fictions I've read on this site are a big disappointment EVERY SINGLE TIME!!! So I'm not planning on looking at the books behind the Natasha world. The story is fine on it's own.
Comments from author:
Then you are missing out. I've learned about a lot of good fiction from various source material.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome" from DieselDriver
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"Do not worry. I would not wish angry Buffy on anybody."

I added in my mind "well, maybe on Third".
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome" from DieselDriver
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"Do not worry. I would not wish angry Buffy on anybody."

I added in my mind "well, maybe on Third".
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breakfast" from DieselDriver
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"Risen Day" sounds like Easter day to me. Not a bad idea to give presents on that day in celebration of Christ Jesus' resurrection but the tradition of gifts on Christmas is because the "Wise men" brought presents at his birth. Perhaps God did things a bit different in the alternate world.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Comparison" from DieselDriver
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Well I'd say she's certainly not lonely anymore nor does she have the slightest chance of being bored.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Partnership" from DieselDriver
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I wonder what they'll say when they see how much Buffy can and will eat.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Annoyed" from DieselDriver
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Well that only proves (which I already knew) that Russian is a seriously deficient language. No "to be"? No "not to be"? Not even a question in Russian. What an affront to Shakespear.

Plus all those different endings and namings depending on relationships between the speakers. Sheesh. It's worse than Nihongo.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Break Out" from DieselDriver
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"I've died and gone to Texas?"

Wahahahaha! Heaven or Hell? Feathers or lead?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Natasha Redux" from VillageOrchid
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Natasha's choice of the simple life or returning to it is interesting. Does she have a replacement leg? The soul-magic reminds me a lot of the secrets in Galaxy Express 999. Overall, I know you mentioned that you teach high school but you could be a game adventure writer as well, if you wanted to be.
Comments from author:
I have written for games, video and tabletop.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An Offer" from VillageOrchid
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I'm still not sure what the "good neighboors" are unless they are the black stuff (Vrada Nishta?)- or what she might become with a voluntary bonding.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Fairy Tale" from VillageOrchid
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A very political dark-force, who knows better than to kill its minions. Very interesting.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Jul 14] • Not Rated
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