I really love this story and was very happy when I noticed you had updated I have to say I really love Xander's faith in Willow I also really like that you show how grown up recent events have made Willow and Xander I love every conversation Willow and Snape have I love that the twins both babble and Xander reaction to Ron made me really laugh I am very much looking forward to the next update
Review By [hols] • Date [16 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
A nice and interesting story. Normally the unnecessary coincidence of having both the Weasleys and Hogwards interested in Willow would bug me, but you use it well to kick off two parallel intertwined stories with a common origin.
The high pacing gives mixed feelings, on the one hand it is nice to read a story where the story develops so quickly. On the other hand it eels like you skipped over a lot of potentially interesting details and conversations that could have made the chapters twice as long.
I really do like the characterization of Willow and Xander and their friendship in your fic
Review of chapter "Accepted Apologies" from ChaosLady
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Author has made a good start with Percy and the twins have also made a good start with Willow. Nice update.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [14 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Resolutions With Resolve" from twlight
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I can't express how happy I am that Willow got the rest of her family including Percy to realize what they were doing or how they were acting was not the best thing in the world. I love that it took so little for the twins to understand how Willow feels about bullies and are actively trying to reform the way that they act. I love that Willow is getting the younger Weasly family members to think and be nicer to Snape, it was rather funny that Xander knew within moments of meeting the man that he knew Snape was "once a bad guy" I am as always eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Resolutions With Resolve" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work. Sorry for the later review (internship)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Resolutions With Resolve" from hols
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I really liked this update I like how Willow going back to the hell mouth has made both Ron and Aruther think about how they treated Percy and I adored percy reactions to vampiers and Snape liking Willow amusing me a lot can't wait to see what happens when Ron Fred and George turn up and how Aruther is going to mend his relationship with Percy
Review By [hols] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Resolutions With Resolve" from SamDragon
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Drunk apparating would be bad we will all probably agree.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Resolutions With Resolve" from angeluscado
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This is good. Really good. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Review By [angeluscado] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Resolutions With Resolve" from ChaosLady
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Interesting. I like Snape comments when they met up with him at the library. Especially about Percy being the smart Weasley.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Resolutions With Resolve" from MMWillow
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Oh Arthur just wait until you realizes how truly truly deep his daughter is in cause it is nothing compared to the reality of the situation. When he speaks to Percy and realizes JUST how calm his little girl is about the forces of evil and the concept that she will probably make Moldypants quake in his snake skin and Severus likes her well everyone in in for a rude awakening.
Review By [MMWillow] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Resolutions With Resolve" from vidicon
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Yes Arthur, that might be wise. And no doubt Willow will question Snape on how he got his ingredients. Won't that be a fun conversation...
Thanks for writing
Review By [vidicon] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Resolutions With Resolve" from alynambered
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Quite the serious piece, although some lightness occurs. I am enjoying this. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confronting the Family" from Morgomir
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Great chapters. Keep up the good work. (Sorry for the late review. Internship)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confronting the Family" from borgrabbit
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You Been Haiku'd:
Damocles' sword hangs Threads intertwining their lives Death patiently waits
>^_^< Great chapter!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confronting the Family" from MMWillow
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Oh boy! Pissing off Willow is DUMB!!!!!!!!!!!! Severus bonding with Buffy is a nice touch.
Review By [MMWillow] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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