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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
I can understand Buffy wanting to give her child a chance to grow up without the problems that come from her life and her duty. I hope that she does survive and is able to reconnect with her daughter at some stage in the future. I'm sure her daughter would appreciate that even if she loves her new parents.
I'm a bit unclear on who else is in the story though. Someone else moved on and someone said sorry to someone and someone was turned and staked but I'm not really sure who that was. The emotions are quite clear though, all through the story.
Comments from author:
Thanks for commenting.

Some of the clues are a bit obscure. Here's a summary of the events depicted in the various segments.

1. Xander, under the influence of the Hyena, forced himself on Buffy.
2. Buffy broke off with Angel
3. Buffy discovered that Angel had already move on to Cordelia
4. The Berry couple consulted a lawyer about their idea of paying a young woman to serve as the mother of their child.
5. At the end of session two, Buffy had an altercation with her mother and his thrown out.
6. Buffy sent Angel to hell just as his soul his restored, informing him that she had to stake a turned Cordelia.
7. Buffy abandoned her daughter.
8. The Berry couple received a call about a foundling.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tomfo
Gotta say, I liked this a lot. It was deep with a nice touch of melancholy without being too dark and depressing. Looking forward to more from you.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. Glad to read that I've got the tone right.
Review By [tomfo] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Misty
Wow. Different & good. Thank you very much
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your review.

Glad you appreciated it!
Review By [Misty] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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