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Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from DieselDriver
Review:
OMG, er, is that OMD now? That was hilarious.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [15 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
Mmooch, you're a doll! I love this and that you opened it up for others. I would love to add to it, but I can't. However, between you and cloudleonsgurl, you guys spawned another scene for my Adoptables. Maybe I should rename to that? Anyhow, I love the loops. If I come up with one, I'll definitely add it. ^.^

CT.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked the outtakes. Can't wait to see if you come up with one.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [5 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from zigpal
Review:
These are a hoot. Great job everyone.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from clarityfades
Review:
Interesting take
On Buffy's fate.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from Harry
Review:
Well, that will teach Buffy not to try and twist things to her own way of thinking! If that were the case, she'd bring in either Vamp or Dark Willow to shake things up! *UHMMM Slayer Bloo, YUMMY!*
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from AllenPitt
Review:
Her big problem is, it's pretty much impossible to win in S7 without taking heavy casualties. And apparently any casualties cause the scoobies to turn away from her. She's not perfect, but that's what they're demanding. Plus of course D'H always rigs it so things will go slightly wrong (at least). Best course is, finish S7 and move on with her life, minus scoobies. She should maybe give Dawn a 2nd chance a few years later when she's grown up, maybe.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Buffy tried to be sneaky
But found it quite freaky
So back to real plans she goes
To keep all ten fingers and toes

(Sorry about the bad poetry, but I liked Buffy's attempt to go really far back in time.)

mmooch
Comments from author:
Thanks! When I read the opening idea, this just popped to mind. Then, I carried it through, and remembered an episode of Angel . . . I could have written it out, but I like leaving things to the reader's imaginations.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
*having a very good chuckle* Really enjoyed this short little chapter! Thank you. :)

P.S. Sorry, no rhyming review from me, I utterly SUCK at anything to do with poetry/rhyming.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from bradsan
Review:
Evil and fun to read. can't wait for more.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Very happy that Buffy finally got her way!!! Yay!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from divaslayer
Review:
LMAO. Oh, that was hilarious. Awesome chapter, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from darkwoofe
Review:
Best one yet! This chapter was just all WIN! Nicely done. I hope you plan to add more!
Review By [darkwoofe] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Really Funny. Great comeback to writing here, really enjoyed this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Go to Disneyland" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
OMG! that was Hilarious. Although the evilness of the Teletubbies or Barnie goes much deeper. Evil puppetry. Just ask Angel and co. LOL.
Comments from author:
I've done the evil puppets a couple times before though, so I thought it was Disneyland's turn.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from carvell
Review:
I think this chapter has a lot of potential to be expanded into a few chapters at least with some more details on what has happened, what Kennedy thinks and how Xander copes with his new tutu plus a few more details on Anya's having to wear a iron stove (I think it was?) as I can not picture it, so yes I think this could be expanded a lot.
Review By [carvell] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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