Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from ConstanceTruggle
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Mmooch, you're a doll! I love this and that you opened it up for others. I would love to add to it, but I can't. However, between you and cloudleonsgurl, you guys spawned another scene for my Adoptables. Maybe I should rename to that? Anyhow, I love the loops. If I come up with one, I'll definitely add it. ^.^
CT.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked the outtakes. Can't wait to see if you come up with one.
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from zigpal
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These are a hoot. Great job everyone.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from clarityfades
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Interesting take On Buffy's fate.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from Harry
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Well, that will teach Buffy not to try and twist things to her own way of thinking! If that were the case, she'd bring in either Vamp or Dark Willow to shake things up! *UHMMM Slayer Bloo, YUMMY!*
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from AllenPitt
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Her big problem is, it's pretty much impossible to win in S7 without taking heavy casualties. And apparently any casualties cause the scoobies to turn away from her. She's not perfect, but that's what they're demanding. Plus of course D'H always rigs it so things will go slightly wrong (at least). Best course is, finish S7 and move on with her life, minus scoobies. She should maybe give Dawn a 2nd chance a few years later when she's grown up, maybe.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The first potential arrives . . ." from mmooch
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Buffy tried to be sneaky But found it quite freaky So back to real plans she goes To keep all ten fingers and toes
(Sorry about the bad poetry, but I liked Buffy's attempt to go really far back in time.)
mmooch
Comments from author:
Thanks! When I read the opening idea, this just popped to mind. Then, I carried it through, and remembered an episode of Angel . . . I could have written it out, but I like leaving things to the reader's imaginations.
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from bradsan
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Evil and fun to read. can't wait for more.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from BrownFinderth
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Very happy that Buffy finally got her way!!! Yay!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from divaslayer
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LMAO. Oh, that was hilarious. Awesome chapter, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.
Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from darkwoofe
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Best one yet! This chapter was just all WIN! Nicely done. I hope you plan to add more!
Review By [darkwoofe] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from christytrekkie
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Really Funny. Great comeback to writing here, really enjoyed this.
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Go to Disneyland" from christytrekkie
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OMG! that was Hilarious. Although the evilness of the Teletubbies or Barnie goes much deeper. Evil puppetry. Just ask Angel and co. LOL.
Comments from author:
I've done the evil puppets a couple times before though, so I thought it was Disneyland's turn.
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from carvell
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I think this chapter has a lot of potential to be expanded into a few chapters at least with some more details on what has happened, what Kennedy thinks and how Xander copes with his new tutu plus a few more details on Anya's having to wear a iron stove (I think it was?) as I can not picture it, so yes I think this could be expanded a lot.
Review By [carvell] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from clarityfades
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Okay...I kinda love this. :D Mainly because it cracked me up. LOVE God's dog helping Buffy out & her not being sure if the ideas came from herself or the dog. & I LOVED Buffy making Xander wear the tutu & Kennedy the collar. Hilarious! Great chapter, so glad you decided to try your hand at a loop! :)
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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