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Review of chapter "Chapter 7, part 3" from Mordare
Review:
Still loving the story and looking forward to more. Should be interesting if he starts teaching some of the Anything Goes techniques.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from possom
Review:
Ranma1/2 without the curse is not Ranma1/2. It's like Superman being normal.
Comments from author:
So Ranma locked into a curse, or Ranma with a different curse is? Sorry but i have read far to many of those and i feel that the time has come to change the status quo. If that is not not your cup of tea then i bid you good day sir/madam.
Review By [possom] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from ShadowKage
Review:
Very nice. Very nice indeed. Is Ranma going to wake up from his unscheduled nap in time to get away from Sabertooth and his posse? What else do you have planned I wonder? In any case, this is very nice, one of the better X-Men:Evolution - Ranma 1/2 Crossover stories I've seen out there.

Until next time, Beware what lurks in the shadows...

ShadowKage
Review By [ShadowKage] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Mordare
Review:
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.

As for their accents. Just stick with the German for Kurt. Southern for Rogue and Cajun for Remy.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [25 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from unknownreader
Review:
bull sh!t ranma got knock out with just 2 hits especially with his upgrades. like both metals on his bones and his even further enhanced healing
Comments from author:
dude, he won't be out for long and besides ever think what happens when his brain slams into his metallic skull? it ain't pretty.
Review By [unknownreader] • Date [24 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Calen
Review:
really liking this so far. but ranma got knocked out! keep it up!
Review By [Calen] • Date [24 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from borgrabbit
Review:
Being what some might call a southerner, I generally resent when someone thinks to attempt to mimic an accent. It almost never seems to carry well in print. That said, its okay to use words and contractions with a regional flavor like "you all", "ya'll", "crick", or "crawdad", or phrases generally associated with the region of interest. My suggestion is to merely refer to the type of accent being used, like "His Georgian Blue Ridge accent...".
Sorry about the soapbox. This was a "Great Chapter!" and I look forward to more!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Don't have cliffhangers.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Rob
Review:
Good part, except poor Ranma can't catch a break.
Review By [Rob] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 part 2" from Mordare
Review:
Great story. Thanks for all the updates. As always I am looking forward to more. Gotta love seeing his new harem starting up. His mother would be so proud.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 part 2" from DarthPayne
Review:
Very nice. :)

Will Ranma have any more encounters with the Tendos?

And when will he meet his father Logan?
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 part 2" from borgrabbit
Review:
Haiku fu:

Fantastic story
Just now reaching chapter six
Kind Muse sharing tricks
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 part 2" from Rob
Review:
Some spelling errors, but overall a good part. Nice fight scene at the end, skill beats brute force most of the time.
Review By [Rob] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 part 2" from TurfSurfer
Review:
Are you no longer updating your FFN account?
Comments from author:
Yes i am, however i get better responses regarding my Beta request here... most of the time. Besides i have decided to hell with it and publish these 3 there and hope somebody decides to render some help, i mean sure it is easy to criticize my grammar problems, but what happens when i actually ask for help and no one is there?
Review By [TurfSurfer] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 part 2" from Raziel
Review:
Great so far I look forward to more its nice to see so many updates in a couple of days looking forward to what happens next.
Comments from author:
It was mostly because i have writters block in my Buffy fics as well as the fact that i am about to complete my first story on FF.Net
Review By [Raziel] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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