Ranma1/2 without the curse is not Ranma1/2. It's like Superman being normal.
Comments from author:
So Ranma locked into a curse, or Ranma with a different curse is? Sorry but i have read far to many of those and i feel that the time has come to change the status quo. If that is not not your cup of tea then i bid you good day sir/madam.
Very nice. Very nice indeed. Is Ranma going to wake up from his unscheduled nap in time to get away from Sabertooth and his posse? What else do you have planned I wonder? In any case, this is very nice, one of the better X-Men:Evolution - Ranma 1/2 Crossover stories I've seen out there.
Until next time, Beware what lurks in the shadows...
ShadowKage
Review By [ShadowKage] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Being what some might call a southerner, I generally resent when someone thinks to attempt to mimic an accent. It almost never seems to carry well in print. That said, its okay to use words and contractions with a regional flavor like "you all", "ya'll", "crick", or "crawdad", or phrases generally associated with the region of interest. My suggestion is to merely refer to the type of accent being used, like "His Georgian Blue Ridge accent...". Sorry about the soapbox. This was a "Great Chapter!" and I look forward to more!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Great story. Thanks for all the updates. As always I am looking forward to more. Gotta love seeing his new harem starting up. His mother would be so proud.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 part 2" from DarthPayne
Review:
Very nice. :)
Will Ranma have any more encounters with the Tendos?
And when will he meet his father Logan?
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 part 2" from borgrabbit
Review:
Haiku fu:
Fantastic story Just now reaching chapter six Kind Muse sharing tricks
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Some spelling errors, but overall a good part. Nice fight scene at the end, skill beats brute force most of the time.
Review By [Rob] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 part 2" from TurfSurfer
Review:
Are you no longer updating your FFN account?
Comments from author:
Yes i am, however i get better responses regarding my Beta request here... most of the time. Besides i have decided to hell with it and publish these 3 there and hope somebody decides to render some help, i mean sure it is easy to criticize my grammar problems, but what happens when i actually ask for help and no one is there?
Review By [TurfSurfer] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated