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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bigfan
Review:
Good story so far. I always saw Walsh as one of the best villains in the show, and I often enjoy stories where she gets to work her evil magic. Xander's luck is truly atrocious...getting hit by the car...wow. Luckily he was able to stay in charge of the freaky merging. Now that it seems the Initiative is cutting back on their patrols, I hope Xander decides to go back to Sunnydale soon. The Scoobies reaction to his arrival, would def be something to see! Great job and I hope you update soon!
Review By [Bigfan] • Date [11 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from kffs
Review:
Fun!
Review By [kffs] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from CPTSkip
Review:
Happy New Year to you too and thanks for an update to an excellent story. I just hope the next update is a bit quicker. I also wonder if Xander is going to run into Faith due to extreme coincidence, author's fiat, or the work of the PTB? Hope so.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Good of you to update this little chestnut. It is a good beginning, please continue.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from DrDamage
Review:
This is good fic.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job, hope to read more.

-It might bee nice to put in what crossovers you plan to use.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am enjoying your story. I like your competent but not super-Xander. I can't wait to see the Initiative go down. And of course the Mayor is still on his countdown to demonhood. And what about Faith and her Watcher? Will the two of them show up early?

I must admit I find the 'posters' on Xander's mental walls to be very amusing. Nice to see you have a grasp of the male mind and especially the teenaged male mind. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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I do believe this means he's on his own. His only real hope is recruiting allies of his own. If the Initiative has numbers and military hardware on its side, well then, so does he.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from grd
Review:
My vote is....War! I can imagine Xan working in the shadows slowly weeding out the scourge that is the Initiative. A bribe or bullet here and there to drive their political, monetary, and supplies away.
Review By [grd] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Alright... nice to see the latest chapter. Looks like we may see the rise of Punisher Xan cause it sure doesn't look like the Watchers are going to be any help. Nice to see the touch of angst and misdirection back on the Hellmouth. Good work.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Greywizard
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I smiled when I saw another chapter of this had been posted, and I'm delighted to say that I wasn't at all disappointed when I read this.

Travers is definitely matching his canon portrayal, which is pompous, self-important and overbearing, and I'm hoping he comes to an appropriate end by the conclusion of this story. ;-)

Oz caught the fact that Giles wasn't being entirely forthright with them, but mistook the reason for it, although it was for some entirely plausible reason, and one which won't cause the other Scoobies to dig deeper for it.

I'm definitely enjoying this story, and hope to see more of it soon. ;-)
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review and the recommendation, I really appreciate it. Updates for this story may be awhile coming since I want to concentrate on my other stories. Olbear :)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Walkerbow
Review:
Interesting story so far, keep it up I would like to see where you take it.
Review By [Walkerbow] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Greywizard
Review:
As always, I'm delighted to see more of this show up, man!

I'm rather doubtful that the Council will actually do anything helpful - since they canonically provide pretty much nothing of any use to Buffy over the course of the series.

What, exactly, is this special enzyme Xander is producing, and why is he producing it? Is it a natural occurrence, a possible mutation, or is it a result of his exposure to Coach Marin's Swim Team modified fish DNA fiasco?

Anyway, I'm hoping we see more of this soon.

Thanks for sharing. ;-)
Comments from author:
The enzyme is something that I thought to help explain why Xander was able to get beaten up on a regular basis with no long term harm. Thanks for the review :)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from djhardim
Review:
Good to see more of this.

It would be a darn shame if the concentrated serum that Maggie is giving the soldiers caused them to mutate into creatures like the Swim Team.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
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