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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from DieselDriver
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"Then we go to war" and the demons will run. LOL Xander is a good man, and I can't help but think of the title of that Doctor Who episode: "Demons Run".

The entire saying is "Demons run when a good man goes to war".

This seems like the beginning of a REALLY good story.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DieselDriver
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It would be funny if the uncle's name was John...
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
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Mad Maggie strikes again.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [5 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from DarthTenebrus
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This Crowe person, he wouldn't happen to have the first name of Jack, would he? And the Sir he spoke with, my guess by the language he used would be a cardinal with the Vatican?

Edit/Reply: Yeah, this was before I read chapter Seven, and I really liked "Vampire$" when I saw it; James Woods really played a good role in that flick, and Maximilian Schell did a great turn as the Cardinal that made a deal with a master vampire to get turned...I just hoped it was those two characters...
Comments from author:
No Crowe's first name isn't Jack and he wasn't talking to a Cardinal in the Vatican. The back story of Deputy Marshal Crowe and Marshal Hennessy will be filled in later chapters. Thanks for the review
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from AnimeRonin
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I recognize most of the players involved, though when I saw 'Crowe' I read 'Crow' and was worried that Jack and his crew were going to be getting involved.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [3 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from grd
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I really hope Travers gets eaten, slowly by something nasty.
Review By [grd] • Date [3 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bigfan
Review:
Good story so far. I always saw Walsh as one of the best villains in the show, and I often enjoy stories where she gets to work her evil magic. Xander's luck is truly atrocious...getting hit by the car...wow. Luckily he was able to stay in charge of the freaky merging. Now that it seems the Initiative is cutting back on their patrols, I hope Xander decides to go back to Sunnydale soon. The Scoobies reaction to his arrival, would def be something to see! Great job and I hope you update soon!
Review By [Bigfan] • Date [11 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from kffs
Review:
Fun!
Review By [kffs] • Date [7 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from CPTSkip
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Happy New Year to you too and thanks for an update to an excellent story. I just hope the next update is a bit quicker. I also wonder if Xander is going to run into Faith due to extreme coincidence, author's fiat, or the work of the PTB? Hope so.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Good of you to update this little chestnut. It is a good beginning, please continue.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from DrDamage
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This is good fic.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job, hope to read more.

-It might bee nice to put in what crossovers you plan to use.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am enjoying your story. I like your competent but not super-Xander. I can't wait to see the Initiative go down. And of course the Mayor is still on his countdown to demonhood. And what about Faith and her Watcher? Will the two of them show up early?

I must admit I find the 'posters' on Xander's mental walls to be very amusing. Nice to see you have a grasp of the male mind and especially the teenaged male mind. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
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