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Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna - Kennedy" from laoshi
Review:
I’m with Kennedy on this bored at the Louvre does not compute. Wishing there weren’t quite so many other people there yeah. But yes she should take Luna’s interests into account when planning dates, especially if she’s competing with at least two other girls for Luna’s attention.

I don’t recall Luna being part giant in Wand of Uru. Is this something you’ve put in to explain her rather extreme voluptuousness or have you been revising it again? Should I go back to chapter one and re-read the whole thing?

I love thinkgeek and I’m very amused by the idea of a Luna turning the bag of holding into an actual bag of holding.

Hermione got the Potter Twins Yes! I’m being spoiled and I don’t care! (Imagine me saying that to the tune of I’m a Lumberjack and I’m OK)

Kennedy’s machinations are going to end up with her scoring a terrific own goal aren’t they?

I can’t wait for the Satsu chapter and the finale.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure if you've read far enough into WoU to notice bits of half-jötunn Luna, but it does mention that in the story thus far...
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna" from laoshi
Review:
Great story idea if anyone deserves to have slayers fighting over them it’s Luna.

Miss Sleeps with Straight Girls would make a cool secret Indian name.

This is some classic hundredaire banter.

I’m not up on season 9 of the comics did Kennedy die in them or is it your own idea?

I’m enjoying all the sleeping with Luna metaphors my favourite is make a moon

landing.
Comments from author:
Kennedy dies sometime during S8; it's a passing reference in conversation between herself and Satsu that she died and stayed under for six months before Willow resurrected her somehow but neither her death nor resurrection is ever really explored.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna" from BaileyMatutine
Review:
Clearly you should have the next thing that happens be [insert occurrence that makes no sense and lacks any sort of precedence, but fanon declares to be awesome].
Comments from author:
Kennedy/Satsu/Vi/Luna/Willow sex act that somehow resurrects Tara so we can add /Tara to the end of that harem mess?
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna - Kennedy" from BaileyMatutine
Review:
A piece that seems to actually care about Kennedy?

Aren't you worried about offending your fans?
Comments from author:
Actually, most of mine care about Kennedy. I seem to be one of the few, apart from the complete out and out KINO pieces where there's a chick named Kennedy but you'd never know she was the BtVS Kennedy if you weren't reading it here...
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna - Kennedy" from scottm
Review:
Liked it. Very good examination of their relationship. Good for Kennedy to realize Luna was bored. Keep up the excellent writing.
Comments from author:
Well, good of her to be flexible. Bad of her to not know in the first place and end up needing to be told.
Review By [scottm] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna - Kennedy" from Thyatira
Review:
I'm not overly familiar with Kennedy. By the time I started watching the show it was already over and watching reruns do not a good schedule make. I'm actually more familiar with Satsu as I did read some of the comic. Still, your characterization of Kennedy has caught my eye. Looking forward to seeing how Satsu sashays into the situation. And poor Vi. Normally I wouldn't care for a situation like this where someone was actively trying to steal someone's girlfriend, but you've managed to make it amusing. And Luna is part giant? That explains the six-foot thing, but I don't recall that from the series. Is it just something you added or am I displaying geek-fail? I've actually been keeping up with Wand of Uru for some reason(boredom), but so far I've got nothing to say beyond, meh it's okay. Probably because that's how I feel about the main character, original included, nothing on your skills as a writer. Sorry I don't have anything more substantial to say.
Comments from author:
Well, as I put in a note I later trimmed off, Kennedy and Satsu both embody two fairly negative lesbian stereotypes. I try to smooth them out into likable characters much of the time, but every so often I feel the need to smack people with what Whedon created to remind them how far I've brought them in my own stuff.

Luna is only part-giant in Wand of Uru; it factors into the plot with greater frequency and importance as things go on. :)
Review By [Thyatira] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna - Kennedy" from Meneldur
Review:
Interesting. Nice to see Kennedy actually thinking about her relationship and working on it. Nothing too complicated, but fun nevertheless. Liked seeing Gabby and their discussion about their friends. Wonder how they became friends - maybe the fact that they're both half/quarter breeds, or was it just mutual interests and stuff? Liked the hints towards Wand of Uru, though of course, I'd be happier with more detail. Still, it's nice enough, and since it's noting certain, it doesn't really matter besides hints. It was also good to know what's delaying Wand of Uru.
So, Luna hasn't told them of her half-Jotunn status? Interesting. Well, wait and see, I suppose.
Comments from author:
Wand of Uru should be moving forward soon; Lexi and I are drawing out Ráichéal tonight and she's the last piece, since she'll replace Lara for the dream sequences and a few references in other places.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna" from scottm
Review:
Thanks for writing this. I tried to read some other stories you posted last week, but when I got the notifications and clicked on the links the site said you had already taken them down. I just wondered what happened. Like the bet. Will we get to see what happens next?
Comments from author:
http://www.tthfanfic.org/story.php?no=20368 <- Chapters 3 through 6
http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-10166-30/

I posted a few stories as ficlets and then merged them into collections after they fall off the Latest page (72 hours). Helps keep my account uncluttered, you know?

And yes, this is stage one of a series and we'll be seeing at least four more pieces over the 12th-18th.
Review By [scottm] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna" from BaileyMatutine
Review:
I didn't actually read this story but clearly I should review it because you are an author I follow and I must therefor acknowledge your existence and demand you give me babies even in those stories where your writing quality doesn't deserve response.

Also I gave you a ten out of ten.
Comments from author:
I'm just sorta baffled at who thought it would be a good idea to celebrate breaking 7k reviews (200 past me) in one breath, and then come out and say they only wrote to reviewwhore in the next. O_o
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna" from Meneldur
Review:
Weird, but fun. At least Willow is smart enough (or is aware that even she doesn't want to get into this relationship mess) not to join in. I enjoyed Satsu's idioms, though. Where will this go? who knows. It's extremely odd, that's for certain. I wonder what Luna thinks of it.
Comments from author:
We'll see Luna interacting with all three of the participants as the story unfolds, although I doubt I'll be writing from her perspective. She's kinda like Illyria to me: I can write about her, but the oddness of her mind makes it nigh-impossible to write well for long AS her.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna" from anotherlostsoul
Review:
Your brain is a scary place. Just saying.

Still... this should be epic. I can't wait to see it play out.
Comments from author:
It's also loosely tied in to the Wand of Uru megastory, so it should give me a chance to see how people react to various decisions I'm thinking of making down the road.
Review By [anotherlostsoul] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna" from Wise
Review:
I review! I read! Laughs were had! Nargles were suspected!
Hang on, I lost my train of thought...
Comments from author:
Here, have some sticky toffee pudding...
Review By [Wise] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Eep. I suppose this is a "let the games begin!" moment. As long as Luna wins... *grins*

Delightful Bit. Thank you for sharing it.
Comments from author:
Well, I think Luna wins no matter which Slayer wins. Unless they all give up on her and have a rough lesbian threesome.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna" from Ignotus
Review:
The puns, allusions, metaphors, associations, euphemisms, innuendo, and other expressions available for use with a name like Luna Lovegood will never be exhausted. I love it.

12 for 12 on the 12th; should make for an interesting Sunday.
Comments from author:
Sunday, Sunday, SUNDAY!!!
Review By [Ignotus] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everybody Loves Luna" from (Current Donor)Clavell
Review:
Cool, more Snarky Lesbian Slayers And Others from JoeHundredaire, meaning more WIN for the readers And if you want even more WIN, might I suggest a pairing made in Hell: Illyria... and Agatha Heterodyne. Nothing says Planetary Domination like a combination of the God King of the Primordium and a Spark :). And if this particular pairing isn't on your list, mayhaps we could see it somewhere in the future? :)
Comments from author:
Well, on top of the badly-executed fan service attempt that is Satsu, a lot of lesbians are just plain offended by the premise of the character. I mean, how retarded would you think a guy was for going up to an out lesbian over and over trying to pick her up?
Review By [(Current Donor)Clavell] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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