Review of chapter "Prologue" from eriktheviking
A very well written emotional and conflicted Xander.
Review By [eriktheviking
] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from MavenAlysse
ooooo ... I am intrigued. I do hope you plan to write more.
::puppy dog eyes:: Please?
I like that Cordelia immediately wants to know what's wrong and how to help - it's clear that even with their past problems, she does still care for Xander.
Thank you so much for sharing - I awaite further chapters with anticipation!
Comments from author:
I don't like when authors write Cordelia and Xander having a bad relationship. I like to think that even after all Xander did to Cordelia, he had the responsibility or the kindness to apologize. And Cordelia, being the awesome person she is, forgave him . . . eventually. And they've cared for each other for a while and that doesn't just go away. So, I had them like each other.
Thanks for reviewing and more will be here soon, hopefully. I've been very busy lately (and so have the plot bunnies, but I'm hoping they'll slow down eventually), and it makes it hard to find time to write.
Review By [MavenAlysse
] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Runewolf
Short, but nice start. It makes sense that Xander might find it hard to ask for help.
Review By [Runewolf
] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]