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The Legacy of the Xel'naga

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Review of chapter "3" from Destrark
Review:
good story, but I originally came to let you know that someone copy and pasted your story 'As if the Hellmouth wasn't Enough' called GreenTree on the Harry Potter Fan Fic Archive. no credit given to you that I can see. Thought you would want to know.
Review By [Destrark] • Date [7 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from omnimercurial
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*Shiver* Chilling stuff. After crossing the line of a justified study of predatory creatures that have attacked him we are now looking at Bad Bad things. He's gone from a desire to preserve life&fight evil into Dr. Mengele territory. That Red Skinned female with heat powers he killed did not attack him&was shown to be capable of taking out Vampires... So Sad&such a waste. Nasty outcome for poor Clem too. As to Kendra... A Psychotic Break may be on the cards for Xander. Either that or a Watcher Hit Squad.
Review By [omnimercurial] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Loatroll
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Very interesting stuff. I really like your take on Sylar-ish Xander. Thanks for the great read.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Fayari
Review:
My new favorite story! Hoping for the next update soon!
Review By [Fayari] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Zyanadryn
Review:
Ahhh, Xander as a Syler... interesting ... mmmmm (picture Mr. Burns, mmmmmm)

Looking forward to your next update!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [22 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
So it begins. The look on Xander's face when he realizes that he killed a slayer will be a madding thing. Update soon.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [12 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from TheDon
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instead of looking for dangerous demons to study, why doesnt he look into regular animals and see how some of their abilities work. like how some jellyfish as biologically immortal, or how lizards regenerate etc, even a cats nightvision and snakes head and vibration sense. Do you think xander would be able to mimic those abilities?
Review By [TheDon] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from cataclysim
Review:
Great Update! Xander has finally taken a life but he doesn't know it. Looking forward to when he finds out.
Your explanation for how his ability worker is very good, better then the show described it.
Keep up the good work.
Review By [cataclysim] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from valdimarian
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For some reason reading your description of Sylar made me think of Dexter Morgan and his "Dark Passenger" AKA his need to kill. Now granted, Dexter seems to be able to focus his urges and channel them into hunting bad people (at least for the first few seasons, I haven't seen past season 2) but he at least had some seriously F*ed up psychological damage to back up his psychopathy.

I dunno, random word association I suppose. You might want to check out the first season or two of Dexter if you want to write a good psychopath (sociopath?).
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Bobboky
Review:
oops
Comments from author:
indeed
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
Impeccable chapter, my curiosity to see where this goes has leveled up and so in thanks -http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-4a86QxQWE
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Kaosreign
Review:
Is Xander becoming Evil or what? Because I aks because since you gave him Syler´s power it sort of looks like your going in that route.
Comments from author:
No, he just gets the obsession with knowledge ('the hunger'), which is known to affect moral restrains (Peter attacking both Nathan and his mother), and doesn't realize yet he actually has a problem. And the demonic nature of the Slayer gets him to make wrong conclusions about Kendra.
Review By [Kaosreign] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Klimmatt
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Very interesting so far, and I'm interested to see how the knowledge that some of the demons he's been killing are entirely peaceful creatures, let alone that he's killed a Slayer, will affect him.
Review By [Klimmatt] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from TheDon
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also, it was shown that sylar doesnt need to kill his victims to get his powers when he learned he also had some sort of empathetic amplitude, he just prefers to do look at brains.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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