Review of chapter "An intervening event" from Eureka
Review:
Nice to see a new chapter, and glad that you at least say that you are going to keep working on it. So Xander is going to try to get Alex to see him in a better light after that fiasco huh?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [11 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ekki-ekki-ekki-pitang-zoom-boing" from Hawklan
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nice how the love spell went with Adam on the cence
Review of chapter "An intervening event" from morgyair
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Typical teenage boy, just when you think they aren't listening you find out they really did....hmmm food for thought! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [morgyair] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An intervening event" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good character piece.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An intervening event" from AndreaMaine
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You have a very good AU tale going here. I'd love to see where you go with it in the future.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "ekki-ekki-ekki-pitang-zoom-boing" from tchizek
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Interesting, not enough changes to divert the love spell but enough to shorten it some. Bad news coming to town!
Great chapter!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [7 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dancing by the light of the moon" from tchizek
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This is an interesting take on the end of first season and second season. Adam makes a great mentor for the Scoobies.
Thanks for a great story, I will be tracking this one!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dancing by the light of the moon" from Hawklan
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hmm I wonder what Jenny is up to and if Oz will travel soon to meet some Vikings :)
Review By [Hawklan] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birthday Suprise?" from Hawklan
Review:
ohh that was an easy take down of the Judge.....
Comments from author:
same as in the show!
Review By [Hawklan] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Wonderland- We're all Mad Here" from Hawklan
Review:
good Adam took over in telling Joyce about the supernatural.
Review By [Hawklan] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Odds of sucessfully navigating an astroid field?" from Hawklan
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6.
Nice playing with Xander's dad :) Good Adam showed Buffy that book.
7.
AHH Tessa survived the drive-by here? Nice...
8.
AHH this Halloween went rather easy :) and good Eyghon was dealt with as well. But somehow Adam it quite to frank about his immortality here......
9.
OK Joyce didn't know about Adman being Immortal,,,which doesn't explain her lack of reaction to him having not aged in 20 years before.
But good the Ted thing ended with Buffy on the run :)
Review of chapter "Bring out your dead!" from Hawklan
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1.
uihh Giles took the new about Adam rather well :)
2.
rolf Xander should learn that you only ask question if you really want to get the answer :) but good Adam starts to train them.
3.
nice that Adam want to take X and W in....
4.
ahh Buffy shouldn't bet against Adam :)
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Joyce knows about Adam being Immortal? Because she didn't react to him looking the same 20 years later. hehe I hope for Adam's sake that Willow needs a while to figure out his his Methos :)
Hawklan
morgyair
