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Review of chapter "Leafy Discovery" from bradsan
Review:
You didn't stop writing do you because that would be sad. You writings are good and I would love to see them updated.

So did you stop.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing and no I haven't stopped, unfortunately real life got in the way. As to this particular story, I have a couple of more chapters half done but need to do a linking chapter to them first.
Thank you for your patience, I hope to have some time to write in the next couple of months.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Leafy Discovery" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Your choice of word is absolutely appropriate as I thought it might a little sickly sweet, but I will take your comment as a positive one and thank you for taking the time to let me know what you thought.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [19 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Painting the Heart" from spk
Review:
Love this so far. Such a great story idea. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Comments from author:
Sorry for taking so long to reply and thank you for the review, for some reason I thought I had in fact already replied.

Anyway your wish is my command and I present to you Chapter 5 and hope you enjoy this as well.
Review By [spk] • Date [27 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Painting the Heart" from justapiranha
Review:
I started out loving this fic, but not this latest chapter. Most of it was quite good. I just think your not doing the Legolious characters justices, he comes off sounding like a little boy with his first schoolyard crush, instead of 3,000 year old elf that he is.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [22 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Painting the Heart" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I am really enjoying this but Long for more and wish the chapters would both come more quickly and not end quite so soon.
Comments from author:
I am glad you are still loving this, sorry to say I only have one more fully written chapter to go after this but I am open to suggestions for what you would like to see happening.

Keep in mind I do have chapters 7 & 8 partially written. Note next chapter may be more to your taste in regards to length.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Painting the Heart" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
I am very much enjoying this story, even though I know next to nothing about the 'Lord of the Rings' trilogy.

I look forward to where you go with this.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing, I am glad that you are enjoying it. Please let me know what you think of the following chapters.
It is particularly great that you are willing to give it a try despite not knowing much about Lord of the Rings.
I guess a good love story speaks to everyone.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Painting the Heart" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome chapter, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Comments from author:
Thank you as always for your support and for reviewing every chapter, it is much appreciated. I will endeavor to keep the high standards my reviewers hold me to.
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Longing for Sunshine" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I *want* to like this story...but it's throwing me off. Your dialogue is rushed and sounds false/uncharacteristic at times. Example:
She was rudely awakened by Angel shaking her, “Buffy, wake up, you were calling out in your sleep. By the way who is Sunshine” he asked curiously.

It sounds like he's just rushing to say this. I would perhaps edit it to say:

She was rudely awakened by Angel shaking her, “Buffy, wake up, you were calling out in your sleep."

"Hmm?" Buffy mumbled, her voice thick with sleep.

"Are you alright?" Angel asked curiously. His coffee-brown eyes raked over her face. "Who's 'Sunshine'?"

....or something like that. Just a break between dialogue when the characters are changing their tone, kind of deal. A bit more detail, perhaps, is what is needed.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to leave such a detailed review, that is always appreciated.

While I agree with you that parts of this story are a little rushed, I am glad that you provided an example.

I am not as familiar with the Angel characters as I am with the Buffy ones and while some of the dialogue may not have been as detailed as I usually try to be, it still gets the point across. Also I don't think that it was necessary to describe this in much detail since Angel knows that Buffy may not be happy about him being in there so he won't be mucking around.

I will add that I know it was a little fast at the beginning of the story, but haven't you just written things quickly so that you can get the idea out.

Finally while I agree with you about detail in dialogue, something I stressed to another young author that I have been mentoring, I think you will find that the rest of the story will not be quite as bad in that department and invite you to vet it and let me know if that is the case.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Longing for Sunshine" from aidensmom
Review:
Its about time she snaps at people. She bit her tongue far too often.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review and especially for letting me know what your favourite bit was.

I couldn't agree more with that observation especially when it comes to her love life.
Review By [aidensmom] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Longing for Sunshine" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
ooh wish...hmm, but it was in her mind and not out loud. but still she seems dressed and ready to go. HE HE.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing and congrats for being my 10th reviewer for this story.

Thank you too for pointing out the wish curse which I had totally forgotten about and while she seems ready to go, she won't actually be going far on this occasion.

Did you like the reference to the statue of David?
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Longing for Sunshine" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome chapter, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Comments from author:
Thank you once again for reviewing this story, I am glad this chapter held up to your expectations.
What was your favorite bit?
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Elf Daze" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Fascinating start. Looking forward to what comes next.

Blue
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review, I am glad you are enjoying it and I hope the next chapter doesn't dissappoint.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Elf Daze" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome chapter, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review, I am glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Elf Daze" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Oh my gosh this is awesome! Only I want them to be able to get together and stay that way. I love the way that she thinks it is just a dream but yet seems to know it is more than one.

I am really looking forward to seeing where you take this. Please don't leave me hanging for too long.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing and welcome to this story. Your enthusiastic comments are gratefully received and I am pleased that you have mentioned what you love about it.

As for leaving you hanging, fear not as the next 3 chapters have already been written and I will be putting them up weekly. I am just starting on chapter 6 now that I have a theme for it thanks to a previous reviewer and most of chapters 7 & 8 are written however I am still ironing out the kinks in getting them together.

Look forward to your comments after next chapter.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Elf Daze" from justapiranha
Review:
I am really enjoying this fic. As always looking forward to your next update. Is that other door away to see Buffy in the morning? or is it the way for Buffy to permantly stay inmiddle earth?
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing, I am really tickled pink that you enjoyed it.

As to the other door I hadn't really worked how to incorporate it, I just loved the idea of it, so I thank you for bringing it up and for the suggestions on how to utilize it.

I have already written the next 3 chapters and was having some difficulty working out how to proceed with chapter 6 and you may have pointed out a way to resolve it, if I go ahead with it I'll certainly give you credit.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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