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Review of chapter "Chapter One: Xander Harris Natures Fu*k-bunny." from DieselDriver
Review:
Somehow I just can't see Giles doing those things described in this chapter. Invisible things, things that left no marks yes, visible signs of torture no.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [8 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: The Awakening" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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good that their power is now unlocked and ouch what a training regime.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [1 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Mommy’s strap." from lorwen
Review:
good story!
Review By [lorwen] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Mommy’s strap." from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Interesting, very interesting!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [21 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Mommy’s strap." from Eureka
Review:
Oh man! So Dru is not barmy..just a Nephlim.. WOW. Kinda explains a few things for me.
Can't wait to see how Spike deals with her message. LOL
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Mommy’s strap." from Studyofchaos
Review:
Kinky... Mommy's Strap... and I thought things were going to get weird... Oh well, at least Dru is around to keep things normal...
Comments from author:
Lol, its good to see someone else who loves Dru's brand of 'normal' :)
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Mommy’s strap." from Genuka
Review:
*looks at author, shakes head* evil, evil, evil...
Comments from author:
Im not evil *smirks* im just very low on morals lol :)
Review By [Genuka] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13: Mommy’s strap." from trongod
Review:
Loving the Dru-ness that is our favorite seer; hoping she gets to hang around and get some Xander time as well as the Sisters Three. Got to wondering what's going on in Sunnydale, and whether or nor the Creator sent her Voice to have a little chat with both the Elders and the Power That Be Useless about their stupid games they've both been playing...

Don't really see either group actually believing unless they get the whole burning bush treatment or its equivalent, so I expect that Xander and His Harem in Waiting are going to get messed with in the near future...
Comments from author:
Your right, the spying on them was the first shot to see whether Leo was lying about the message,and since they got nothing from the spying you can expect them to do something done. And don't worry we'll see the sunnydale crew soon, i gotta have some Willow/Buffy girl time mocha's and all lol.

Thanks for reading. :)
Review By [trongod] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: A New Beginning" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: A New Beginning" from CastorandPollux
Review:
Great story.
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: A New Beginning" from Genuka
Review:
*Hahahahahaha!!!!* Perfect! I can't wait for more!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [3 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: A New Beginning" from moringstar
Review:
Can't wait to see what comes next.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [3 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: A New Beginning" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Prue is a perv! Prue is a perv! I'm saying this like it's a bad thing? Nice touch of comedy with that. I see the Elders are going to be the smacked du jour, this should be fun! It's always fun to see God go from cutesy to dead serious whoop ass on someone that deserves it. Will the PTB get a slice of humble pie as well?
Comments from author:
The PTB will get there's once Xander makes his way back to good ol' SunnyD, but for now its the Elders that are under the microscope. And as to the pervyness of Prue, i felt that as the oldest it was bound to happen lol, plus its fun. lol
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [2 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: A New Beginning" from MagnusXXN
Review:
....Well, its a good idea. And its improved since the first episode. But you still need to use more contractions, and I'm assuming you watched the show Btvs? Using some of their dialog would help.

You have a beta reader I assume? If not look into one, if so look into a proof reader to kick around scenes.


): )
Comments from author:
I'll work on adding more contractions as i go. And as for the Btvs dialog, i made this an AU for a reason. I won't add any of the episode dialog unless i feel my storyline will benefit from it. But thanks for reading. And please continue doing so.
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [2 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: A New Beginning" from SkeeterB
Review:
Oh boy, The Metatron is PISSED... I hope Leo says the right thing to him before something bad happens.
Comments from author:
Hopefully Leo's foot will stay out of his mouth.
Review By [SkeeterB] • Date [2 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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