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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cordyfan

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Just found this one - it really made me laugh. Ilyria would be such a contrast to the other Ascended ancients with their "holider-than-thou" attitudes. I'd really like to see more of this.

Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir

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Great story. Keep up the good work.

Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka

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Lov'n This Series! More please!

Review By [Genuka] • Date [8 May 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon

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So as long as you are not her enemy you can keep your spine? I'd take that deal!

Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Grevane

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"May The Great King-God Bless Us and Rip Out the Spines of Our Enemy"
Classy!

I can imagine trying to ask one of the other ascended ancients whats going on there:
Daniel: So Oma, we ran across a statue of a 'King-god' awhile back that looked like your white glowy form. Except it had some sort of helmet/armor and a pair of big sword things. You know any-
Oma: We don't talk about Illyria.

Would love to see more about this!

Comments from author:

lols. I just might write that scene... after papers... stupid higher education...

Review By [Grevane] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous

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Hehe, nice ending line. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.

Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)

MaxGSandeman

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I'd like to know how Illyria got to the planet.
Jack call the President, means SG1 going to the planet. Perhaps??
A series of short stories?

Review By [ (Current Donor)

MaxGSandeman] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluejello

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Illyria vs. The Priors. Yep, I'd pay to see that fight!

Review By [Bluejello] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking

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Great fun scene-setter.

Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky

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awesome

Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL

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Hee! I see Illyria has apparently regained something of her old form, with numerous tentacles, etc.?!

Comments from author:

Why yes! All the better to beat her people to death with, after all.

Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)

Katrina

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I'm just glad I wasn't drinking anything when I read this, because my result would have been like Tao's. Delightful read. Thank you!

Review By [ (Current Donor)

Katrina] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthPayne

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I'm guessing that that statue is supposed to be Illyria?

And doesn't she refer to herself as God-King?

Comments from author:

Yes, and while she does think of herself as God-King, Teal'c is attempting to translate something that as First Prime he would have had limited contact with, as well as accounting for linguistic drift.

Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TAO

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Dammit...you made me choke on my Pepsi from laughing at this.

Comments from author:

Nuuu! Not the Pepsi!
Glad you liked it.

Review By [TAO] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon

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More please.I am very curious as to who it is.

Comments from author:

It's Illyria, in a smaller version of her original form, which she may or may not have regained after Not Fade Away. I can't say there will be more, I haven't planned on it, but who can control their Muse?

Review By [SamDragon] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]