Great chapter. Liked it. :)
Sam really can be incredibly tense for someone so smart.
Hopefully from now on his and Dean's relationship can truly improve for the better.
Congrats!

Thanks

Fun and great chapter. I liked reading it a lot. :D
Eager to see what the surprise is. Congrats!

Thanks the next chapter is almost done so you wont have to wait long

is the surprise family?

Yep.

Surprising and fun and great chapter. I liked it. :D
I bet the babies are beautiful.
Congrats!

yep. No ugly babies for my favorite guys. Thanks for reading

Another superb chapter!
Must say that beside the bonds, the auras were brilliant! :D
Liked it, congrats!

thanks :)

You know you are going to have to diverge this story further from your alternate or it is going to get very old very fast. Honestly I prefer slash to het but will read any that are well written and if a slash story is bad enough I will gladly drop it for better stories. I think you intended for a person to read one or the other but I have to question why you as a writer would go to the extra effort when it would be easier just to tell the readers to ignore any Faith interactions instead of this rough edit thing you are doing at the moment.

It is an interesting premise and I have to wonder where it will eventually end up going.

Keep writing,
~Reflections

Some points will be the same but it will diverge more as the plot progresses.

thank you

Lmao poor deadboy.

^_^

This review goes for this story as for the version with Faith included.

While you focus on Xander at the moment it would be interesting to see in a later chapter what Athena thinks about Dean. For one reason because despite how Dean often seems he is a very nurturing type (there is a reason he is so good with children), the other reason it would give the reader an idea what you plan with the character since you took him out of his normal verse. Is he still the Righteous Man and Michael Sword?

I'm not sure. That literally 6 years down the time line. I have some ideas about Dean but if you want to recomend a talent for him, i'm all ears. You've given me alot to think about. Thank you

Awesome and fun chapter.
Wonder what happens next? Quite exciting. :)
Congrats!

Thanks

Yay! Thank you thank you thank you! I love the Talents you gave Xander and I love how his first reaction was horror that he might've been hurting his girls. That's so very Xander :) Looking forward eagerly to more!

^_^ thank you

Interesting.
I love that there's also a aversion of only Xander/Dean pairing.
Eager to see how this story goes.
Congrats!

Thanks