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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Bunney
Review:
Yay! I have missed you :) I love the fic :) thx
Review By [Bunney] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Bunney
Review:
Yay! I have missed you :) I love the fic :) thx
Comments from author:
Thank you for not giving up on me. This chapter and the one to follow have been giving me fits for a long time.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Nightscream
Review:
OH glad to see this one back! Keep it up. :D
Comments from author:
I've got most of the next chapter, but it's Giles intro and I'm having trouble with the shovel speech. having two chapters almost completed was driving me crazy, so I just went ahead and posted this one even though I'm not really happy with it. Glad your still reading.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from purrfus
Review:
Priest had such potential. Oh well.

Love what you've done with Black and Jack.
Comments from author:
Yes it did, it just didn't interest my muse. On the other hand, Black Hat was one HOT vamp, lol.

Thanks
Review By [purrfus] • Date [29 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from purrfus
Review:
Nice to see the changes in POV. Black and Jack's conversation is great, and the idea about demon language primers is perfect.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [29 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from musumenosuoh
Review:
very cool!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I wasn't really happy with the way the chapter ended, but it's meant to be just a typical day sort of thing.
Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [29 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Knightmare
Review:
Please update soon! It has been over two months! The waiting sucks! :(
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
wonderful read, thank you.
Comments from author:
You're welcome.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [5 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from NutsContract
Review:
Awww, Black Jack is a mess, but an adorable mess. Update soon!
Comments from author:
LOL, thank you.
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Xeelia
Review:
Wonderful chapter!! Loved BlackJack being all messed up that was great! I'm glad Dawn knows what they are up to with the claim and all now. Will she be telling them who she is and about the keyness soon??
Comments from author:
I recently had to give my daughter one of my pain pills for really bad cramps. She was higher than a kite and giggling her head off. I just had to write it in.

Yes she will, I just have to figure out how I'm going to do it.
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from scottm
Review:
Great chapter, it explains a lot.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I had hoped that it would make sense.
Review By [scottm] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from HebiR
Review:
Oh, personal opinion here: The episode where Tara's family came to town, Spike hit her, rather lightly, to prove that doing so would set off the chip and that she was fully human. This, plus his drive to protect Dawn pre-soul, and the way he never harmed Joyce even before the chip, makes him a perfect Example A for "Even evil soulless monsters can love and choose NOT to hurt people."
Comments from author:
LOL The scene I had in mind was Spike going all protective over Black not hurting Dawn and Jack jumping in telling Spike not to pick on his brother. Spike has always been the big brother to Dawn regardless of his evil, not evil, can't be evil but wants to be, status. I think that makes him the perfect person to really understand that Black really does love Dawn and is willing to prove it. Everyone else is thinking that it is more Jack that she is involved with rather than both of them.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from HebiR
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I really do wonder what a "normal" family would make of the vampire inside their brother/uncle. Heck, I wonder what they'll make of the apparently thirty-something(?) Jack and his not yet twenty girlfriend.
Actually, how does Dawn, as "the girlfriend," come to terms with Black's feeding habits? And, how did we get from Faith's chapter, where Dawn either did not notice or was unsure about Black Jack's feelings beyond friendship, and the current state of affairs? When did she notice or get confortable enough with him? We know Black Jack is trying to coax her into marriage/claim/lifetime commitment, but how serious is Dawn about the relationship?
Comments from author:
I haven't decided yet how the family is going to react just yet. It's going to be interesting figuring that out though. At least I only have two characters to deal with.

Dawn deals with Black's feeding habits as a girlfriend by remembering two things. One, Black is a vampire and its either this or him going around killing people. Two, Jack is no longer um, involved in picking out the meals, shall we say? They used to hunt together.

There have been several time jumps. Otherwise this story would have been dragging on forever, lol. This chapter happens about six months after the first.

Right now Dawn is seeing Black Jack as her boyfriends and not much more. She hasn't even gotten to the point where she's seriously thinking about dealing with her virginity problem. That will change, but not just yet. She's going to figure out how serious they are when they meet Spike, at least I hope so. The muse can take off in different directions on me and I might end up who knows where, with my road map in tatters on the ground. lol
Review By [HebiR] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Knightmare
Review:
Is Black Jack considered a Master vampire? I know when he is human he can walk in the sun and all. Is he a day walker like Blade in a sense? I was curious. Thanks.
Comments from author:
Yes Black is considered a Master, mostly because he's not - a minion answering to someone else or shall we say mentally impaired? Cannon fodder aren't known for their intelligence. ;)

While Black is considered a Master vampire, Jack is not. This is because they are two separate people. As far as the daywalker bit, not really....although Jack does have some of Black's abilities given to him through their merge, it's mostly things like being a little bit tougher, heightened senses and the immortality. He doesn't have the full package of vampire gifts, but he doesn't have their weaknesses either.
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from NutsContract
Review:
I think I would have been upset with Dawn, if it had been me, even though she did everything right. She really is a genius. I don't think she could've handled that situation in a better way. Anyway, glad you updated, and looking forward to more! :)
Comments from author:
Oh thank you. It was really hard to figure out how she could deal with that situation. As she said, it's not like his family has to deal with a newly Called slayer. They should have some say in whether or not their world gets turned upside down and turned inside out, but there is Jack who has to be able to have a say as well..... I'm glad that you think I worked it out as best as it could be done. Thank you.
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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