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Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from Grovtech
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You did a caper story! I loved the set of characters and the dialogue. Fun stuff.
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from VillageOrchid
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Very cool story. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who's the opposition?" from VillageOrchid
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Does he have a son who is an NCIS agent?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What I did on my summer vacation and a new job" from VillageOrchid
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Enjoying the banter and the character POV.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from DieselDriver
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I would have worded it as "Being given MORE impossible jobs." Quite a change from the normal carnage but a great story and a fun read. Would have made quite a TV show or Movie...
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Logistical Support" from DieselDriver
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HOLY MOLY!!! She's really bringing in the BIG guns. And I don't mean machinery...
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Allies" from DieselDriver
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I haven't watched them in a very long time but I still see him walking and talking when reading it.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Stakes" from DieselDriver
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Whoa! Shades of the Lightning Thief.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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Small quibble with all these stories. You use as your disclaimer 'so and so character belongs to such and such', but don't usually list the name of the crossover universe.

Saying that they belong to Stephen J. Cannell (for example) doesn't help since he has a whole bunch of different intellectual properties.

Since, some of the crosses are quite unfamiliar, but you've made them interesting, it would be nice to know what universes they are from and they're quite a few, so you're basically setting your readers up for research.

The rules may not require it, but I'm sure I'm not the only reader who wonders who 'John Smith' is. Better to say so and so is from 'The A-Team' which belongs to such and such...
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [12 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What I did on my summer vacation and a new job" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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"involuntary flying lessons"

What a lovely turn of phrase! :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from eriktheviking
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Another great development in Buffy, well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from (Current Donor)Listener
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Compared to the other stories in this series (so far), I was kind of underwhelmed by the lack of true conflict. This was more like a first act, where a future story will pay everything off that was set up here. It's not to say that it wasn't good or enjoyable, but I've kind of come to expect more from these. So I'll press on and see what's next.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from lunalurker
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Amazing fun and inventive! And also a member of a very rare species, a Buffy story where things not only went according to plan, it did so smoothly and with class and professionalism. And the cast was great too! Thank you for writing, I am loving this series.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Allies" from DianeCastle
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I noticed your note at the botttom of the page. I find that having a voice in mind helps a lot on writing dialogue. If the character has a distinctive voice and attitude, I can write him or her (or sometimes it) a lot better, a lot easier, and a lot more distinctively. In fact, when I write an OC (as in my Whateley Universe stories), I often try to come up with a 'voice' so I can hear the character in my head as I write and get the character talking properly.
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from (Past Donor)James
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Another great story.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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