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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gideon
“Speed equals mass times velocity"
Actually Momentum is mass times velocity. Speed is distance over time. Apart from that, cool story. Who were the tour guides?
I would suggest trying for a few more contractions in the dialogue next time, it sounded a bit stilted. In Sheldon's case, even more stilted than usual :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for clarifying this up. The guides were OCs, most likely. And Sheldon sounds stilted all by himself, really.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Luna
This was very fun!!

I am a big BBT fan and you portrayed them well!
Comments from author:
Glad to hear this. You're welcome!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Oh no! What if they have exterminated all human life on Earth by standing on a trilobite? They will have to repopulate the Earth, and they only have one girl!
Comments from author:
Oh, it won't come to that, though Cthulhu is going to cut this very close.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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