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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gideon
Review:
“Speed equals mass times velocity"
Actually Momentum is mass times velocity. Speed is distance over time. Apart from that, cool story. Who were the tour guides?
I would suggest trying for a few more contractions in the dialogue next time, it sounded a bit stilted. In Sheldon's case, even more stilted than usual :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for clarifying this up. The guides were OCs, most likely. And Sheldon sounds stilted all by himself, really.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
This was very fun!!

I am a big BBT fan and you portrayed them well!
Comments from author:
Glad to hear this. You're welcome!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Oh no! What if they have exterminated all human life on Earth by standing on a trilobite? They will have to repopulate the Earth, and they only have one girl!
Comments from author:
Oh, it won't come to that, though Cthulhu is going to cut this very close.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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