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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
Ouch! You don't hurt Xander and walk away without consequences...
Comments from author:
Certainly not. Xander is to be respected at all times XD Thank you for reviewing
Review By [Genuka] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Stupid, stupid mutants. They will rue this day!
Comments from author:
Indeed they will. Thank you for reviewing
Review By [Gideon] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from calikocat
Review:
Its amazing how you were able to pack so much feeling and awesomeness into such a short piece.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. That is an awesome review to receive XD
Review By [calikocat] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Omegaprime
Review:
Uh oh.

The mutants fear the anti-mutant people but now, thanks to some brain dead mutants (Magneto's henchpeople?), they have a new band of people to fear.

This sounds like it should be expanded.

Keep up the good work.

Edit: Yeah, now that I thought about this I think Magneto would probably help Dawn and ask his old friend/enemy Prof. X to help poor Xander to get beter faster.
Comments from author:
Thankfully, the Council are more level-headed than the average avenging angel. They'll go after the ones that are really responsible and not hold all mutants acountable. I've given it some thought about whether these were Magneto's people, and I don't think they would be. I know he's the bad guy, but I don't think Magneto would hate Xander.

I'm not sure about expanding. You shouldn't hold your breath. Thank you for reviewing
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
I very much liked this one. ;-)

It would seem that various individuals are about to learn that it doesn't necessarily take large evolutionary strides to develop the ability to show people why they shouldn't screw with certain people or their friends. ;-)
Comments from author:
All it takes is some magic and thousands of years of accumulated knowledge about torture :P

Thank you for reviewing XD
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cryefourme
Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH. I likes it.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you do XD
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A little but of bloodymindedness can go a long way.
Comments from author:
Indeed. I'm sure they'll learn not to fuck with the Scoobies :P Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
**evil smile** Would like to see more of this one
Comments from author:
I'm sure you would :P But this is a completed story. You can reconstruct the Great Mutant Hunt in your imagination. Thank you for reviewing
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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