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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from starwolf
Review:
what happened to the ring issue. if she could not tough the door or remove the ring how did she drag Tony out? the rest was very good. thanks
Comments from author:
Long time since I wrote this and I'm not sure what went wrong with the plot! At a guess I'd say she was able to drag Tony out because he'd opened the door and left it open.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from WhippingDawn
Review:
Very creepy, very uncomfortable reading. But a masterpiece. It's hard to see Faith weak. And this time she was. A very different story indeed.

On my way to #8!
Comments from author:
Yep, part of the idea behind this story was to show that even slayers could become victims.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [WhippingDawn] • Date [14 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from SilverWave
Review:
Now that was just nasty.

Good story though.
Comments from author:
The Girl in the Cellar was one of those stories that tool on a life of its own.

However Faith gets her revenge in a later Unposted story.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [8 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written creepy twist on the canon episode.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from maxthehobbit
Review:
Another winning addition to a great series. Will be looking forward to the next installment. Lots of ways this could go and I know whatever path you choose will be interesting.
Thanks for posting this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot. We strive to entertain!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from bellarase
Review:
I've just spent hours reading this series and I have to just tell you - this was amazing. Faith is not one of my 'favorite' characters, I have never seen the cross overs you've blended (except House and NCIS) but this more than kept my attention and I will be eagerly awaiting the installment of this series! I love your Faith - she's awesome.
Comments from author:
Thank-you for taking the time to read my fics, I'm glad you enjoyed them. More 'Faith in the Army' out soon (well over the next few months).

Cheers,
D.
Review By [bellarase] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from RocksandGlass
Review:
I like it, good ending. Well in keeping with the story so far, a decent conclusion, and a major lead in of what more is to come. looking forward to it.
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
very good read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Finished the series. Poor Faith and Brenda. I rather liked the chemistry between them. I hope this won't break their friendship. A pity Riley had to be so heavy handed to get her and the evidence out.

I do hope someone will point out to Abbey that draining people's life force is not a nice thing to do... And that Faith will get some professional help and a chance at vengeance.

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
These could all be themes for future fics.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from BrownFinderth
Review:
Sort of sad to see the story come to an end. Yet, glad that Faith got out alive!
Comments from author:
Thank-you.
D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from foaminbones
Review:
read all of you stories and loved every single one. the only xovers i knew nothing about was the first one over there but wasn't hard to figure out. great writting. keep it up. cant wait for the nex one or next chapture which ever comes first.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, the next Fita staory will be out in two or three stories time.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [foaminbones] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Oranda
Review:
Great story. I really enjoyed DiNozzo getting worked over. Can't wait for the next installment.
Comments from author:
Poor DeNutso indeed. The Ncis crew will turn up at least once more in this series.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Oranda] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from tosca
Review:
Excellent story! I loved the way you mixed it with the original NCIS episode so cleverly. Looking forward to reading more. :-)
Comments from author:
Thank-you.
D.
Review By [tosca] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Gideon
Review:
Those army guys were not very friendly were they? They are lucky they didn't have to shoot a whole bunch of people bursting in like that. Couldn't they at least pretend to be someone with authority to be there?
And poor Tony found Faith :( I hope being smacked in the head three times by a Slayer doesn't leave him with permanent brain damage.
Also did Tony busting in disrupt the magic spell keeping Faith in there?
Comments from author:
As the Officer said, there were time factors involved.

Didn't Tony already have brain damaged!? Pehaps Faith hitting him repared it!:-)

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Sol
Review:
I really like this series and I hope it continues.
Comments from author:
It'll go on for as long as I've got the time and ideas to write them.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Sol] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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