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Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Eureka
Review:
10+ actually.

Any chance you could come back to this story?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [19 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Vld
Review:
Can't believe I never read this chapter before! Do you plan to write more? I mean, Voldy killed Oz, there's gotta be retaliation for that! i mean, Willow, Xander, Buffy, hell, even Amy! And Spike if he's alive! They should raise hell!
Review By [Vld] • Date [6 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from AndiiShadow
Review:
I love it, so perfecly written with emotions and everything. And I loved the 'bright colors' thing... so cute. And I like Jimmy... He reminds me of someone.

Lovely, simply marvelous.

~Shadi
Review By [AndiiShadow] • Date [24 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from FaceInTheCrowd
Review:
*pouts* Dammit. And I was SOOOO hoping for the Death of Cardboard... *sighs* I'll get over it. SoR is EVIL, and I'm SOOO glad TA kicked his little Soldier-boy arse. *grins* So Joy and Jimmy are the identicle of the three, that's why there powers aren't as great as TA's? Hmm.. Makes sense. And just so you know, as sad as it sometimes seems, this fic just keeps on getting better and better. *grins REAL big* Can't wait for the next chapter. Seeya

-Face
Review By [FaceInTheCrowd] • Date [17 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Cutiepie
Review:
Still feel like I don't understand even half of what is going on, but I'm ok with that as long as there is more to come which might get me straightened out some. =] But the genetics of the triplets? Doesn't work. An egg splitting results in identical twins, and not the fraternal boy-girl combination you have going here. It is genetically impossible to get a boy and a girl from the same egg. Fix that please?
Comments from author:
k, but the J's are indentical almost, except for the whole m/f thing. So, were saying some freak hellmouthy thing happened with them. I know it's onfusing, but I need it that way (if you've noticed Jimmy's got this whole protective twin thing about Joy) Sorry if it's confusing, but I'm using unrealistic circumstances in their birth.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [10 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from FaceInTheCrowd
Review:
Oops. Forgot to add that I TOTALLY forgive you for adding Riley. *grins* The White Bread-bashing in this chapter fantabulous, and I WILL be expecting more. Seeya!

-Face
Review By [FaceInTheCrowd] • Date [4 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from FaceInTheCrowd
Review:
Marvulous chappy, no matter how sad. I've never really fancied Oz and Willow together, but I suppose I MUCH rather have her bare his child than -let's say- Riley. *shudder* Maybe that wasn't the example I should have used.. Eww.. Anyways, Buffy's getting married to Charlie was write on. You're right on the whole Dragon Tamer/Vampire Slayer thing. *grins REAL big* There was SPiKE!!!!! *practically bouncing up and down* There was Spike! And Spike and TA mischeif!! And Spike and Angel bantar!!! *squeals* Yay!!!!! *grins* As I said before, excelent chapter. I do hope TA gets SoR back for the whole pinching deal. And please, Please, PLEASE don't let them cross that INCREDIBLY thin line between Love and Hate, cause I don't think I could stomach it. *shudders* Ugh, the mental images (picture evil little Riley clone with a little female version of Spike meshed with just a tad bit of Faith). *shudders yet again* No thank you. MORE SOON!

-Face
Review By [FaceInTheCrowd] • Date [4 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from FaceInTheCrowd
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You brought in Riley? And SPAWN-OF-RILEY??? *glares* I just might be finished with this story... Or I just might be acting like my normal, stubburn, Riley-HATING-self. *small grin* I suppose I can forgive you. But it's gonna take a lot of will power on my part to get used to SoR. A trust me when I say, a LOT! But I'll suffer though it. For TA, and Graham, and all things Andrew. *grins big* I love my Andrew. And my TA. AND MY GRAHAM! *grins wicked big* I just might forgive you for bringing Sam in, since you brought in Graham, but you are not forgive for White Bread.. Not yet, anyway... But you'll have to earn that forgiveness!!!! With an extra long chapter, featuring TA bashing Riley. *smiles* That's not to much to ask, is it? Course not. More soon!

-Face
Review By [FaceInTheCrowd] • Date [30 Jan 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Review:
This was too much fun! I can't wait to see where you go with this next.

red
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [27 Jan 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from FaceInTheCrowd
Review:
Wait... Sam? As in, GI Sam?? Riley's _WIFE_ Sam??? *whistles* Wow. So she has relations in the wizarding world? *grins* Wonder how White Bread felt about that. *smirk* More soon! I wanna see the Scoobies' (and especially B's) reactions.

-Face
Review By [FaceInTheCrowd] • Date [26 Jan 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Cutiepie
Review:
Hmm, I thought I'd given a review for this story before, but after checking, I see I didn't. Anyway, it is rather a fun story. The triplets have a tendancy to go from seeming even younger than three to much, much older, but that's overlookable, especially since most people who are reading this don't have recent experience with three-year-olds (I have a pair of nephews who practically live with me, 2 1/2 and 5 1/2, so I do). However, I'm glad to read a story that shows there is a match for everyone, even annoying characters like Andrew. =] Looking forward to more.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [26 Jan 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from FaceInTheCrowd
Review:
*grins* For me? ..You sure? ...YAY!!! *grins big* Awesome chapter. I love TA, her logic is so cute. I want a TA... Not now though, MUCH too young for that. 16 is NOT a proper age at which to get pregnant (in my opinion, anyway). More soon, ey? I wanna see TA, Joy, and Jimmy's reactions (though _ESPECIALLY_ TA's) to "Dumbiedore". *grins bigger* That is totally adorible, btw. Seeya

-Face
Review By [FaceInTheCrowd] • Date [23 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from FaceInTheCrowd
Review:
HeeHee.. "Can we panic now???" *grins* Nope. Cause we've got some chapters to update, don't we missy? This is SOOOOO going in my favs. MORE SOON!

-Face
Review By [FaceInTheCrowd] • Date [21 Jan 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of story "Greater Instincts" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Just wanted to say how interesting this story is-not at all a pairing I would have picked. Only problem I have had (trust me-only one is a BIG compliment) is the likelihood of them coming to ask her to testify against Pettigrew. Isn't there enough to charge him with without that? Otherwise, lovely work!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Greater Instincts" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Ohhhh!!!! I really liked the prequel to this, and the one about Andrew. This one sounds pretty interesting. More please. There is going to be more, right?... RIGHT????

-Face
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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