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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Netchka
Review:
Good start tothe story. Xander is being his usual self, foot in mouth all the way. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks Netchka!

Im still working on this fic but my notes went walkabout for a while unfortunately. Only found them again this past week. Look forward to an edit/update soon. :)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
I don't know where you are going with this, but I hope you get there!
Comments from author:
Thanks Gideon! I still have a chunk of text to add to this chapter, so not finished yet. :) Still editing this first chapter at the moment as i need the new section to graft smoothly.

I'm hoping i wont be keeping everyone waiting too long til the next update.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mlock
Review:
Not enough to review.
Comments from author:
Hi mlock, this chapter is still a work in progress, since your review i have however since done an edit, the chapter is not complete yet but i hope the edit has improved the chapter compared to before.
Review By [mlock] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
OH WOW!! Willow babble is insaaane!!! She needs to develop it as a weapon!
Comments from author:
Glad you like it Kayron ^_^ thanks for the review. i have now edited chapter 1 somewhat, please could you check out chapter 1 again and let me know if you think ive managed to improve it or not?
Review By [kayron] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TurfSurfer
Review:
... what?
Comments from author:
hi turfsurfer. the chapter is a WIP so please bear with me. i have now edited this chapter somewhat, please could you check out the altered version and let me know if its any better?
Review By [TurfSurfer] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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