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Review of chapter "Torrent" from DieselDriver
Review:
If you get complaints about Natasha I doubt seriously if any will be from me. I like Mary Sue, she's such a sweet girl. LOL

Over on the Crystal Hall, Maggie Finson had a character, a magic user, who had that problem. She found an ingenious way to limit what the character could do with her power. To much usage caused severe weather or famine somewhere else on Earth and since she was a Sidhe she couldn't abide doing that. This character is WAY more powerful than anyone I've seen in your story. Still a teenager too. If Maggie can do it, you can too. I am enjoying it more the more of it I read.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparation" from DieselDriver
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So much for a firearm making Buffy less conspicuous.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Tense" from DieselDriver
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Good Grief! If they were men I'd say they were suffering from testosterone poisoning.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interrogation" from DieselDriver
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The bit about the missing leg reminds me of the story of Douglas Bader, English flier during WW2 who had the distinction of being the only fighter pilot in the war who had to artificial legs. He was shot down and only manged to survive because he could unstrap his legs and get out of the aircraft. He was captured and put in a POW camp. The captors retrieved his legs and repaired them before giving them back. He then proceeded to escape so many times they transferred him to Colditz where he continued his escapades until they threatened to take away his legs. Hmm. Escape and Escapades. Wonder if the two words came from the same root...
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrival" from DieselDriver
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That certainly explains the reasons behind the questions I asked. Thank you.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torrent" from VillageOrchid
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An interesting way to have continuing adventures in the same "problem".
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decoy" from VillageOrchid
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I'm a little confused as to where Buffy has been for the past few chapters. Fighting elsewhere in the battle I suppose, but I think I missed that bit of exposition.
Comments from author:
Buffy went with the other team when they entered the Citadel

Here's the line

"Two teams, Vogel, Wilson, Stein, St Martine, Dawws, Guererra, Buffy. Me, McReady,Miller, Carroll, Akasi, Tasha. We need intel so that's first priority, second is killing as many of these bastards as you can. Any questions?"
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torrent" from DieselDriver
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This was a really cool. I'm looking forward to much more really good reading from you.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrival" from DieselDriver
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See! I told those doubters that she had to have gotten a leg somehow. And now there is a mystery as to how and who made the fancy prosthetic. I love it when a plan comes to fruition. Even if it's not mine as long as it's a plan for the good.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torrent" from moglwi
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I enjoyed both your stories with tasha and I hoe you will be returning to these stories
Review By [moglwi] • Date [25 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torrent" from lunalurker
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A surprisingly good series to read, considering my total lack of knowledge so far for anyone in the story besides Buffy. Natasha is a great character, and in no way resembles the actual definition of the dreaded Mary Sue, so no need to stress about that.
Thanks for writing and hope to see more from you soon. :)
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [20 May 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Torrent" from maxthehobbit
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I really like Natasha and Buffy as a team. This as a sequel seemed better than the original ... maybe because you didn't need to explain so much, just plenty of action. Great story.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Torrent" from tomfo
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So nice to see Tasha is as sneaky as ever. Thanks for another great fic, hoping to see more from you soon.
Review By [tomfo] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torrent" from Gideon
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Cool ending. Buffy found a way to use military resources for once! And now they get to skip all that pesky space travel between planets :) I wonder how they will be remembered in that other universe when they return?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Torrent" from (Current Donor)Tempi
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A great story in your excellent series. Buffy and Natascha make for a great duo. I look forward to their next adventure.

Making the Slayer loose a valuable weapon is just cruel. I'm sure a future Nimrod auto-cannon won't cause something as insignificant as a time paradox. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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