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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from ShyBob
Saw the end coming, but it was still masterfully done. I think Buffy may have been mechanicking out of her weight class, though. Your Buffy/Doctor dynamic is amazing...Poor Riley.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
Great ending. On a whole, your 11th doesn't feel that different from your 10th.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [16 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Hmm, a pity that. But nothing to be done about it. Would the fountain not survivie a black hole? If it was that easily destroyed, why did not the Time Lords do so?

I look forward to the further stories.


Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
If you look at what the Time Lords did and didn't destroy, they didn't destroy a whole bunch of stuff that they probably should have. Plus, this would be Rassilon who was in charge of destroying it, and Rassilon probably would want to keep it, just in case he could use it. Rassilon isn't exactly the most morally sound guy.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Current Donor)vidicon
You could always make a second FR21 rated story for snippets like that. I was expecting this to work this way. Dalek idiots... Poor Doctor, he's had to deal with the Daleks twice now. I wonder if he got all of them. And if the fountain may be reversed.

Thanks for writing.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
I do so love this series.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from CrystalBlaze
Sooooo.. bets that the Genetic annihilator destroys all the Daleks instead?
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
oh riiiiiiight like the Dr thinks he can trust them now. but really looking forward to him reprogramming the thing to do something brilliant.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from tart
Before I keep reading (I've banked up a few chapters now) I love that 11 is in this one, more authors need to use him! I understand why they don't cause he's pretty asexual compared to 10 but I think that's what makes him fun and interesting.

Can't wait to see him and Buffy interact.

Love this and all previous series instalments, eagerly awaiting every update.
Review By [tart] • Date [12 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
Nice use of slayer strength. I've noticed a dramatic shortening (not the cooking kind) of the chapters from your first story to now. Are you still writing the same way or are you posting as you go?
Comments from author:
Actually, I am writing the same way. The difference is that I'm taking a screenwriting course, now, and in screenwriting you have drastically shorter scenes. The longest a scene should be is 3 pages, and even then, it's on the long side. And that's in screenplay format. So because I've been working on that, my ideas for scenes have naturally gotten shorter as well, even in my fiction writing. I noticed, in "Elizabeth", that this trend seems to continue to a much higher degree. I'm probably going to have to post several sections together into a chapter, when I post that story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from nightshadowlife
Awesome story!!!!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from CageFire
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Oh dear. Things go from worse to worse. You do make all of them jump through hoops, do you not?

Thanks for writing
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from MarcusSLazarus
The arrival of the Daleks was definitely dramatic, and so far subsequent events have raised some very interesting questions regarding what the Daleks are here for (‘Renegade’ Daleks aren’t exactly uncommon, but with Davros MIA that severely limits the reasons why some Daleks would be acting without the authority of the Emperor...), to say nothing of the exceptional concept of Buffy’s notebook and her reason for keeping it; keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Actually, this is Doctor 11, so there is no Emperor Dalek, I believe. I actually had to look this up, because it was confusing. There isn't even a Dalek Prime! Just a Dalek Supreme, who is white. I think the Dalek Supreme is the new leader... oh, never mind. As I said, it's confusing. But I hope (fingers crossed) that I got it right!

I'm glad you liked the notebook. I didn't want something like River's diary. I wanted something uniquely Buffy. The notebook will come up again, in future stories.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from ShalaDakiri
The reasons for the notebook are kinda morbid, but completely understandable. I think Buffy was better prepared for her own death than her friends.
Comments from author:
Buffy makes some comment, later, about how, when she was dead, she knew her friends were safe. And I was just like, "Um, why would you think that? The only other Slayer on Earth is Faith, and she's evil. Why would you think your friends would be safe?" The notebook was my answer.

It was also the only way I could think of to have Buffy not get automatically killed by the Daleks.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from ShalaDakiri
The Doctor gaped at her. "I'm your weapon?"

"Well, I'm your weapon!" Buffy said. "Why can't you be mine, too? I think it's sweet."

The Doctor shook his head, in awe. "You might be the only person I know who could take an insult from my worst enemy and consider it a compliment," said the Doctor. "Or at least, you're the only one I actually like."

Only a Slayer would consider calling someone a weapon sweet. I liked this exchange.
Comments from author:
I know! I've never seen that done before, and as soon as I thought it up, it just became good enough that it had to be the entire theme of this particular story! I just think that it's so cool that what a weapon means to Buffy is symbolic and important in an entirely different way than what a weapon is to the Doctor.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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