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Review of chapter "Rephaite" from aussiemel
Review:
I love this story. I would love to see more. especially as it gets up to faith getting called and Jack joining the SGC. Brilliant story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I fear that the next chapter has run into a bit of a snag. Sorry about that. Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [21 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I will try.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from AndreaMaine
Review:
I like this story so far and will be watching for updates to it.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Regrettably with all the others I'm writing it may take a while to get round to this again...

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from alynambered
Review:
Glad to see and read a new chapter. Thanks for writing.
Comments from author:
You're welcome and thanks for reviewing
Review By [alynambered] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from MoonFireStar
Review:
awesome update ....Doc Frasier is one of my all time fav TV docs of all time !!! thanks for explaining "Rephaite"cuz I was on my way to look it up.....
Comments from author:
Thank you. I like Janet too, hence her frequent appearances in my stories.

I tend to leave explanations for my more obscure mentions, glad it helps.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [MoonFireStar] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Hurrah for Janet, and for Sara and Faith and the rest of the O'Neill family, backing Jack up 100 percent and welcoming him back into his life.
Comments from author:
Yes. I thought he could use it.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from Rich
Review:
Excellent !! I like the way you portray all of the characters, and I really like Jack's family. Sara is definitely in charge, Faith is about half grownup, Charlie is trying to be a grownup (some of the time), and Brenda is just a little bit baffled -partly because she can't actually see what's going on (and apparently, Debra's middle name is Brenda). You get extra points for including Janet. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad you like the family. Regrettably I goofed with Debra's name. I was thinking about Brenda in Lonely Souls. Ah well... it should be corrected now and the sequel is about half way done, I think. Okay, maybe a quarter.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Rich] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from SarahLou
Review:
Love this fic so far :-D One thing though - up until this chapter the youngest O'Neill was 'Debra', and now you're using 'Brenda'...? Just thought I'd mention it. Please update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Yup, I goofed. Long since corrected, but still a goof.

Working on the sequel.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [SarahLou] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from RedCalypso
Review:
It was kind of confusing to see a chapter that was out of order in time. Also, is it Debra or Brenda? I vote for Debra. Other than that, I love this series. It's good to see Faith living with a loving family.
Comments from author:
I might change the order of things, not quite sure yet. It´s Debra. I goofed.

Thank you. It´s a tonic for the things I do to her in Waifs and Strays.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the update, though I don't think permanently damaged knees would let Jack be in the Stargate program. I hope to read more soon.

Also, with time-skips you may want to start mentioning the kids' ages
Comments from author:
The knees get better, after a fashion. But torturers tend to go for joints...

True, that. I may just change the order of the thing.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from Aille
Review:
Its great to see you updating this. I recommend you rearrange the chapters or note at the top that this was before the previous chapter. It was a bit confusing at first; but a great read.
Comments from author:
thanks. Yes, I need to consider how I wnat to do that.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Aille] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from Tjack
Review:
Lovely.
Comments from author:
Thank you. And thanks for reviewing
Review By [Tjack] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from grd
Review:
Beautiful reunion.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I felt Jack could use one.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [grd] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from PATM
Review:
Damn but this brought envious tears to my eyes. Or were there tears of appreciation? No matter, thanks for posting it.
Comments from author:
Thank you, whatever the reason. Thanks for reviewing
Review By [PATM] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rephaite" from AlecStar
Review:
Nice. I am really enjoying this story though I think there is a bit of an issue: in chapters 4 and 5 you refer to Faith's little sister as Debra while in chapter she has suddenly become Brenda. Other than that I absolutely love it.
Comments from author:
Thank you, and: Whoops! Sorry about that. It should be fixed now.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [AlecStar] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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