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Review of chapter "Rephaite" from Morgomir

Review:

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Comments from author:

Thank you. I will try.

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Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from AndreaMaine

Review:

I like this story so far and will be watching for updates to it.

Comments from author:

Thanks. Regrettably with all the others I'm writing it may take a while to get round to this again...

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Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from alynambered

Review:

Glad to see and read a new chapter. Thanks for writing.

Comments from author:

You're welcome and thanks for reviewing

Review By [alynambered] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from MoonFireStar

Review:

awesome update ....Doc Frasier is one of my all time fav TV docs of all time !!! thanks for explaining "Rephaite"cuz I was on my way to look it up.....

Comments from author:

Thank you. I like Janet too, hence her frequent appearances in my stories.

I tend to leave explanations for my more obscure mentions, glad it helps.

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Review By [MoonFireStar] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from RevDorothyL

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Hurrah for Janet, and for Sara and Faith and the rest of the O'Neill family, backing Jack up 100 percent and welcoming him back into his life.

Comments from author:

Yes. I thought he could use it.

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Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from Rich

Review:

Excellent !! I like the way you portray all of the characters, and I really like Jack's family. Sara is definitely in charge, Faith is about half grownup, Charlie is trying to be a grownup (some of the time), and Brenda is just a little bit baffled -partly because she can't actually see what's going on (and apparently, Debra's middle name is Brenda). You get extra points for including Janet. Looking forward to more.

Comments from author:

Thank you. Glad you like the family. Regrettably I goofed with Debra's name. I was thinking about Brenda in Lonely Souls. Ah well... it should be corrected now and the sequel is about half way done, I think. Okay, maybe a quarter.

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Review By [Rich] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from SarahLou

Review:

Love this fic so far :-D One thing though - up until this chapter the youngest O'Neill was 'Debra', and now you're using 'Brenda'...? Just thought I'd mention it. Please update soon!

Comments from author:

Thank you. Yup, I goofed. Long since corrected, but still a goof.

Working on the sequel.

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Review By [SarahLou] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from RedCalypso

Review:

It was kind of confusing to see a chapter that was out of order in time. Also, is it Debra or Brenda? I vote for Debra. Other than that, I love this series. It's good to see Faith living with a loving family.

Comments from author:

I might change the order of things, not quite sure yet. It´s Debra. I goofed.

Thank you. It´s a tonic for the things I do to her in Waifs and Strays.

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Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from JediKnight

Review:

Very nice job on the update, though I don't think permanently damaged knees would let Jack be in the Stargate program. I hope to read more soon.

Also, with time-skips you may want to start mentioning the kids' ages

Comments from author:

The knees get better, after a fashion. But torturers tend to go for joints...

True, that. I may just change the order of the thing.

Thanks for reviewing

Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from Aille

Review:

Its great to see you updating this. I recommend you rearrange the chapters or note at the top that this was before the previous chapter. It was a bit confusing at first; but a great read.

Comments from author:

thanks. Yes, I need to consider how I wnat to do that.

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Review By [Aille] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from Tjack

Review:

Lovely.

Comments from author:

Thank you. And thanks for reviewing

Review By [Tjack] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from grd

Review:

Beautiful reunion.

Comments from author:

Thank you. I felt Jack could use one.

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Review By [grd] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from PATM

Review:

Damn but this brought envious tears to my eyes. Or were there tears of appreciation? No matter, thanks for posting it.

Comments from author:

Thank you, whatever the reason. Thanks for reviewing

Review By [PATM] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Rephaite" from AlecStar

Review:

Nice. I am really enjoying this story though I think there is a bit of an issue: in chapters 4 and 5 you refer to Faith's little sister as Debra while in chapter she has suddenly become Brenda. Other than that I absolutely love it.

Comments from author:

Thank you, and: Whoops! Sorry about that. It should be fixed now.

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Review By [AlecStar] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "She'ol" from serenityselena

Review:

poor Jack... it must have been hell on earth for him...
it sure took some time to be rescued from that hellhole....
hopefully he'll recover (as much as possible after such an ordeal) soon :)

Comments from author:

Pretty darn bad, yes. Three months, like in canon. But he has a two daughters as well as a son to help him get through, and a loving wife.

Thanks for reviewing

Review By [serenityselena] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Not Rated