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Review of chapter "chapter 9" from preier
Review:
naruto on the hellmouth was a surprising idea, but i very much like what you did with it.

naruto's different back story is a nice touch and Xander's instinct to recreate a village is excellent.

spy mistress Cordelia and assassin Marcy, uh? good beginning for a roster^^

thank you for sharing your stories
Review By [preier] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 9" from musumenosuoh
Review:
very cool!
Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 9" from Elleria
Review:
Very happy to see an update, looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [14 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 9" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great chapter, thanks!
Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [13 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 9" from Dragonbaita
Review:
GREAT!! AS ALWAYS!!!
Review By [Dragonbaita] • Date [13 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 9" from tavinseven
Review:
I really love this story. I love how you haven't overpowered Xander but you still made him strong enough to kick demon butt. I like your use of the hyena I've seen it used before in fanfiction's but never like this. I hope you continue this story because their are too many naruto buffy stories that never finish and I love the potential of them.
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [12 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vilkath
Review:
Very interesting start, and honestly just because Xander doesn't have something doesn't mean he can't learn how to do it over time after Halloween. I've only read the first chapter so far so I'm not sure how this fic has developed yet but by just having chakra Xander has a good chance of being able to learn other skills by simply watching the Naruto series lol.

The only possible draw back might be the slash pairings. Honestly neither Xander nor Naruto come off as truly into men in canon, nor most fanfiction. I've never liked the 'wham' you like guys approach some slash writers use. As long as it's not Xander the one lusting after guys I can live with it, but a little warning of which people with be yaio would be nice before I really get into a story. Plus there is a fact there is a complete lack of decent men for Xander to be interested in in the Buffy-Verse unless you go the 'I hate you but really love you approach' with Xander and Angle or Spike lol. Which I've always put on the same level of logic as Harry Potter fics that match him up with Voldemort.
Comments from author:
I'm still iffy on whether or not I want a pairing. If anything ill make Xander a tad bit bisexual. I hope you enjoy the rest of my chapters. Please review. :D
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [28 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Genuka
Review:
Good chapter and great portrayal of his determination as well as his caring. The clarification from the hyena was also quite helpful.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Doraemax
Review:
Huh, Xander's first kill... do we have any background story on the people he kill? why the whole sacrifice ritual thingy? were they normals? or did they belong to a group? how did they find Marcie anyway? or is the detail unimportant?

ok, so far Xander's assets include:
- marcie (PA/ assassin in training)
- Cordelia (spy master in training) - is he going to be training cordelia/cordettes like he trained marcie?
- a 'herbshop'/ herbalist/ magic shop-to-be?

wonder what other 'assets' xander's going to collect.
oh, we still yet to see Xander utilizing seals (i seems to remember you made your naruta into a seal-user/master).

Important question: are you going to follow canon storyline? i mean, in buffy canon, Ford is going to stop by, then Eyghon, then the Judge (plus the whole Angelus thingy)...interesting to see how Xander going to react to these events...
Comments from author:
I'm not sure if im going to add a background for them. I like to leave openings in my stories so i can use them later if i need to, but it could just be a random attack as well and unimportant.

I'm going to skip around the buffyverse in order to get this story done the way i want it. I'm not sure what im going to do about angel though. I should kill him off...buuuutttt I could also find a way to get his soul to stick. ;)
Review By [Doraemax] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from mpsshadowmaster
Review:
is this "Village hidden in Knoha" fic real? and if it is, what's the title?
Comments from author:
Haha! Isn't that the question of the day? I read the fic a few years ago and I can't for the life of me find it again.
Review By [mpsshadowmaster] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from dustin
Review:
This story is so interesting! I love Xander in it. Was the fanfiction you mentioned a real one, cause I'd love to read it while I wait for your next update!
Comments from author:
i read one like that ages ago. i dont remember the title though. good luck trying to find it and let me know if you do. i want to read it too!
Review By [dustin] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 7" from Doraemax
Review:
This story has promise. are you continuing?
Comments from author:
I'm working on a chapter now. It's halfway through. I think I'm going to start making my chapters longer.
Review By [Doraemax] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 7" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story! I look forward to reading more.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wow what a cool story!

I had skipped over this story before because I didn't recognize the cross. But you make it easy to pick up what is going on with the character that Xander crossed with because of his costume, and the story is very engaging.

Thanks for a great story, I'll be tracking this one!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I hate when people leave out vital information. You shouldnt assume that somebody knows what you are crossing with. Its so hard to get into other fandoms when they do that. >_
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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