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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from WolfWriter
Review:
How about writing one where Loki decides to put his two cent's in?

He'd go all out to get Buffy something she's actually go SQUEEEE! for.

Since she's a shoe fiend, how about a pair of ever so stylish dragonhide boots, that are enchanted to look like ANY style shoe currently available? From pumps, to wedges, to stilettos, to Doc Marten's, to cutesy putesy little sandals, to fuzzy bunny slippers.

They are always warm, comfy, and fit perfectly. They could also be weather proof, magic proof, and never wear out.

As often as Loki has been a woman himself, he would know what a woman really wants in a pair of shoes.

Plus, he'd bring presents for EVERYONE. From Dawn, to Xander, to Willow, to Faith, to Giles.

Andy is a no-go; Loki doesn't do rewarding stupidity, it goes against his principles.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Dragonelf
Review:
Any chance you will get inspired to write a sequel.

::Gives the plot bunny a Chocolate Pie::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Rune
Review:
So if she lets it go for any time she becomes small again?

And are there any Thor/Buffy matchups out there?
Could be fun.
Review By [Rune] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from divaslayer
Review:
LMAO. Awesome short story, I loved it. Keep up the great work.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [25 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!

Cute.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Greywizard
Review:
LOVED IT!!!!! ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Oakheart
Review:
Andrew has one chance as I see it. But will he think to (be willing to) dress up in a Jane Foster Nurse costume?

SD;)
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Tempi
Review:
A fun little story. Too bad you didn't plan to continue it. Asgardian Buffy-speak would sound even more weird than Thor's usual manner of speaking.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Rich
Review:
It's a long time since I followed Thor, so I'd completely forgotten this feature, which could come in very handy ("where did that giant woman go? There's no one here but this angry little midget with a stick."). However, if I'm remembering correctly, when Don Blake became Thor, his clothes transformed as well - his business suit became a costume, and when he turned back, his costume became a business suit. So it appears that "prezzy" doesn't have quite the same attributes as mjolnir.

This raises another question: if she spins it real fast and then throws it, will Buffy fly? Because Thor could (I always wondered how he steered when he did that, since he was basically turning himself into a giant bullet).
Review By [Rich] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from WolfWriter
Review:
I had forgotten about that little enchantment.

But a walking stick????

Typical present from a guy. If he had asked for Janet's or Jenny's or even Wanda's input, they'd have said "Make sure it becomes a hair stick!"
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SamDragon
Review:
Run Andrew,run. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Senko
Review:
Ah so its modelled on that version of Thor. Objections cheerfully withdrawn, well except for her naming ideas.
Review By [Senko] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from feynstrom
Review:
I'm sure once his female colleagues hear what Thor's done to Buffy they'll browbeat him into solving that little fashion-related problem our favourite slayer has when she goes all Mega-Buffy.
Comments from author:
Hmmm.... Inter-dimensional shoe and clothing aid packages chock-full of unstable molecules, anyone?
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from cmdruhura
Review:
I am a bit surprised that Buffy didn't ask Xander a bit more about Thor from the comics. Though I am thoroughly shocked that Andrew didn't immediately suggest to Buffy that she try stiking her hammer on the ground the way Thor does to switch between personae before he started to list the problems Giganta-Buffy would face.

BTW, just because Xander wasn't the one to be getting on Buffy's case, doesn't mean she won't be going for some payback of her own once Andrew decides that misery loves company and babbles out to her just prior to being stuffed into a sardine can that Xander at least suspected the pending ability to transform back to her regular self.
Comments from author:
Andrew might've gotten around to the switching-by-striking suggestion. Eventually. Not more than fifteen or twenty minutes from then, at the most. He's not exactly known for his interpersonal skills, after all. Xander just grabbed his chance first, and our hero in the Hawaiian shirts probably feels it'll be worth what Buffy will do to him for this.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Prezzy?

She deserved it. Ohhh, Buffy, Buffy, Buffy, you and names.

I wonder when someone's going to realize that this essentially makes her adopted by Thor?
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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