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Review of chapter "6: Nightmares" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
Well written and a great read. True to all three realties as far as I can tell. I hope you add to it one day.
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [16 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6: Nightmares" from Berserkerzeroone
Review:
Awesome story so far, great use of the existing story, although where in the continuum is this, before Enemy at the Gate obviously but where in the timeline is it?

Hope you can continue to write this and bring The Doctor into it.
Review By [Berserkerzeroone] • Date [7 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6: Nightmares" from Vickzie
Review:
Brillant story! Please update some more asap
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6: Nightmares" from CageFire
Review:
This is a pretty great story so far. I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
Comments from author:
Will be getting back to this soon. It's more of an in between story for me, what with everything else I'm writing. I get in a slump and come back to this. ;)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6: Nightmares" from Hermionetobe
Review:
Awesome. I like the whole thing so far. The details and bits and pieces are so good. And I like that you used the established things with Dawn and found an interesting mirror for Rose. I look forward to more of Rose trying to find her feet.

Hermionetobe
Comments from author:
:) Was hoping you liked.
Review By [Hermionetobe] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6: Nightmares" from (Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
I really enjoyed the Pegasus series by Hermionetobe and really like how your story fits in very well with their tone and feeling. The idea that there are more beings like Dawn, each with a different "role" is intriguing and I can't wait to see how it develops.

Good job!
Comments from author:
Thank you! :)
Review By [(Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [28 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6: Nightmares" from draconis
Review:
Very nice complementary piece to the 'Keys to Pegasus' series. You've picked up the author's quill quite well.

Very good intro chapter. What an entrance.

Other chapters well written as well. It was inspired to have Rose be the 'Key to Time' complement to Dawn. The scene with her self-revelation of her genesis was excellent. Good blend of their sharing the 'Am I real?' crisis, and the multiple relative age dyschronia (I made up that word!). Oh! and that Dawn was created by magic and Rose by technology...one could invoke Clarke's Third Law here vis-a-vis magic and tech.

Nicely done.


edit:
I just found out the word "dyschrony" already exists and relates to jet lag...which is kinda similar...sorta. But, I like my "dyschronia" better as far as temporal multi-genesis goes. Or, would that be multi-temporal genesis? I never could keep those straight at the Timelord Academy. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! It'll turn out to be phrased a bit differently, but Key to Time was what the Atlantis team could relate to.

Heh... I'm thinking the dyschronia would be better explained in Gallifreyan, what with the multiple inflections and precise nature of the language. ;)
Review By [draconis] • Date [28 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6: Nightmares" from Kremer
Review:
Good stuff. Yup, progress. Rose is accepting and learning.
Comments from author:
She's stronger than she thinks, just doesn't know how to 'activate' things.
Review By [Kremer] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5: Lunch and Settling In" from SnakeFox
Review:
I read all of Hermionetobe's stories in this series ages ago, when she was writing them. When I saw the blurb about this story, it instantly reminded me of that, but then to find out it was actually set in the same universe was even better ^_^

Really well written, very much enjoying this. Thanks for posting :D
Comments from author:
Thanks muchly!
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4: Mystic Messages" from ozseaside
Review:
I LURRRRVVVEEEE Hermionetobe's work also, and I bow to your skills in being able to play in that sandpit so well.
Just thought you'd like to know that.
Comments from author:
Thanks! :)
Review By [ozseaside] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4: Mystic Messages" from VillageOrchid
Review:
The Rose fix parts are charming, the Atlantis and Dawn parts are a little too fait accomplit for me to enjoy as much.

EDIT: not enough back story or time line pinning. The story starts up and they are together. You don't say that this story is part of a series or a sequel, so we need to learn how they got together during the story. Also I don't know who some of the Atlantis characters are, having mostly watched some episodes from the first 2 seasons and not much after that. I know who Woosely is but not some of the other characters bopping around. You did a good explanation on the AI, but not much other exposition on the others.
Comments from author:
Not sure what you mean. Elaborate?

EDIT: Well, sorry about that. Like I did say in the first chapter, this is based in an established universe, by Hermoinetobe. Added links in the first chapter to help with that. As for Atlantis, with Woolsey in charge, it's the last season. If you want specifics, it's before they find Todd and have to go back to Earth, in deadspace between episodes.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4: Mystic Messages" from Kremer
Review:
Lovely chapter. Some questions answered, and a few new ones raised.

Just wondering, has Dawn already 'checked' Rose for her potential for magic? Or is it she could have a natural, non-magical telekinetic ability? (Still waiting for Roses's reaction to Dawn's first portal... and could we possibly see a Willow cameo?)
Comments from author:
No majik. Her TK will be related to the Ancients/Time Lord version. AKA: Psionic in nature.
Review By [Kremer] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4: Mystic Messages" from Keshkreature
Review:
Lol, this is awesome :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! And thanks for the recommendation! =)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4: Mystic Messages" from Jerri
Review:
Love it, well written, and the characterizations are wonderful. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks! =)
Review By [Jerri] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3: What's the What?" from Jazzibear
Review:
I know quite a bit about canonical Dawn, and less about canonical Rose: but what I do know for sure is that this is an excellent story in its own right, and I’m enjoying it a lot. I look forward to its continuation with avidity.

Very well done indeed!
Comments from author:
Thank you! *beams*
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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