Ooh, good one. A lot less to enjoy pleasure-wise, but interesting character fleshing-out. Especially liked Mycroft's POV of Sherlock obviously being communicated to by John who had to be miming something about comforting Dawn.

WHAT DID SHERLOCK KNOW? Killing me here. Doubtless on purpose. Pity these get chewed up at such a fast rate in the reading.

Amazing

A terrible blow for the slayers! At least they got rid of the old one!!!

Buffy done baking?!
You betta not be faking!

Her entire life has been to serve
Love is something she truly deserves.

I do enjoy this little series
I believe I shall never get weary!

So continue with your updates
(never think to abate!)

For Myffy I do love :)


EDIT: Wait, I forgot to say...Sherlock is a serial killer???!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Please explain. lol. All I know are the RDJ movies...Or, who was the "living with 30 years" serial killer you mentioned?

Mycroft's lady, I confess,
not Buffy, but Elizabeth!

Illyria's presence, aggrandized;
yet, Old One should be capitalized.

Rather than waiting and lest I be cursed,
do I review now, hopefully well versed;
to add my congratulations,
for a story worth adulation's.

Ouch, that must have really hurt, all those poor girls. At least Buffy has someone who will be there with her as she recovers.

I cannot tell you how much I am enjoying this series. I have truly loved each and every one of the stories in it. It is well written, amusing and in this particular story heartrending. Beautifully written. I feel the characterizations are spot on. Well done.

I love this series and it makes my day to see a new one for it. Poor Buffy I am glad she has Mycroft to help her get over losing so many from her team and I'm also curious to see what is happening between Sherlock John and Dawn, for some reason it seems like more than just friends between them.

... I swear, there WILL be art. So-called "Real Life" has gotten in the way, but mark my words, I'm gonna try to make you something :)

This series is love

Lady knight. That's one of the nicest descriptions I have heard in years.

Greatly enjoyed the John/Sherlock/Dawn interaction. And the idea of Dawn as their new neighbor...lovely.

Gah! I wish you'd just make this a WIP single so I can track it! I almost missed it on the latest page!

Can I just say again that I love this series?

You do such an awesome job with the voices of the characters it makes it really easy to "see" the story, the expressions and to feel and understand what they're going through. I really enjoyed how you did both Buffy and Mycroft's voices in this and getting a peak at their thoughts and their relationship. (yea! Baked cookies for Buffy and Mycroft admits he loves her). Not to mention the interactions among John, Sherlock and Dawn. I have a feeling Sherlock put his hand on Dawn's shoulder in comfort because John told him to, but it was still good to see that interaction.

As wrong as it may sound, Mycroft's reaction to seeing Buffy injured made me smile and I may have had to suppress a squeal of glee at the ending. As I said, I really like this sereis. :-)

Thank you so much for sharing this. I look forward to the next offering.

Aww. Your Mycroft/Buffy gives me warm fuzzies.

I'm loving the John-Sherlock-Dawn friendship as well.

I love, love, love this series. You write commander!Buffy so well and the relationships everyone has with each-other...perfect.

Accch. Soooo good. I can't wait to see more John/Sherlock/Dawn friendship (is Dawn a friendship, or a relationship? I was getting really, really, close friend) if you plan to write more. :)

who cares about room numbers? You put in details like that but leave out details about what was so bad about the demon they fought.

Also frankly that many slayers? Probably need to not try this kind of story again- this is not your strength.


you made this demon out to be stronger then Glory. Fail.

I stated more than once the demon was an Old One. Sorry if the demonic side wasn't to your standards but this was *never* supposed to be an action shot, it was Mycroft having to be on the wait-and-see side of the slayer equation.

I never made mention that the Old One was stronger than Glory (though Illyria probably could have given Glory a run for her money and that was at half-power) so I don't see how you can say I did. Buffy got "gutted" which isn't inductive of strength, but of way too many arms/tentacles/claws. As for the amount of slayers, the demon beat Faith, Buffy was just being smart in bringing as much backup as possible. Since we didn't see the battle (which I did on purpose), I can't see how you can get away with complaining about how many slayers there were.

Again, sorry about your disappointment but I think you missed the entire point of the story.

Thanks for the review.