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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Can we say, 'oops!' Nah, ash can't say anything!
Comments from author:
Very true.

And Xander and Angel haven't gotten along well in the best of times. ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [25 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nice to see that it's not only the good guys who have their spells go off course.
Comments from author:
It's only in the Joss-verse where the good guys are the ones consistently screwed over. ;-(
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [22 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vilkath
Review:
I love to see that some one else thinks the same way that I do. When I first read the original story a few minutes ago and started to read the wording of the ritual my mind latched onto Xander. First off it's the only really fair thing to do after how poorly he was treated in the story within a few paragraphs. Secondly it helps full fill all the requirements of his wish, that he could see their faces when their plans fail. How better to do that than have Xander himself being the one to kill them?

It's a good story idea and the only sad thing is that it really has no future. This is marked complete and this version of Xander would be so over powered that it would either cause problems or the author would invent stupid ways to make Xander fail.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. ;-)

Actually, I'm making a short series centered on this story, and the second story is 'Being Ground Under The Wheel," which is already posted to this site.

I'm working on the next story after that, but I'm not sure when it will be ready to post.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [8 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [19 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AonGealach
Review:
I would love to see this expanded into a longer story. I love the idea and I think it would make a great series of one shots of a bigger story showing everything Xander does not get back a those who opposed him.
Comments from author:
Anything more is completely up to my muse's whims, although I do have a companion piece to this just about ready to post. It should be up soon. ;-)
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrazyCamera
Review:
I loved this, but I thought Xander would take longer to kill dead boy.
Comments from author:
Yeah, that's apparently a fairly common idea.

I could point out that by doing so, Xander would be lowering himself to the level he ascribes to Angelus and other scum, but I'm also halfway agreeing with you.

The comment was just too good to pass up, though. ;-)
Review By [CrazyCamera] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordBilbanes
Review:
I liked this chapter. I am sure they enjoyed the deaths they so thoroughly deserve.
Comments from author:
Well, as others have pointed out, they might have died far too quickly. ;-)
Review By [LordBilbanes] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
This thing I must say, and never regret it,
"Take care what you wish for, or else you may get it!"
Comments from author:
Indeed. ;-)

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mordare
Review:
LoL. I thought of doing one like this for your story. I saw the loop-holes you left. It would be a fun story to write. Hope you decide to do more with it.
Comments from author:
Yeah, taking advantage of the loopholes in a Big Bad's rhetoric is always a lot of fun. ;-)

And I've got at least another dozen characters I could use for this idea. Its just a matter of following my muse's whims. ;-)
Review By [Mordare] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Love your Anya. And now the ass-kicking begins! I have enjoyed all the stories in your series, but this one amuses me the most. Of course almost any story with Anya in it has to be a winner. Lol!
Comments from author:
Very true. Anya is a fun character, mostly because she's so outspoken and blunt. Sort of like a metaphorical crowbar to the face. ;-)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Why do bad guys always assume their plans will work?

Great fun with Anya, thanks.
Comments from author:
Arrogance, over-confidence, and just plain egotism, I think.

Glad you enjoyed the story. And Anya simply insisted on showing up. ;-)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from euceri
Review:
Very interesting. looking forward for more superpower Xander.Perhaps crossover with SG1?
Comments from author:
I'll have to see what my muse wants to do. I'm currently got a companion story almost ready to post. ;-)
Review By [euceri] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jarvey
Review:
I agree, this is most certainly the winner.
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from unicornzvi
Review:
This is what I was expecting when I read the setup for the previous story.
Comments from author:
I wanted to highlight some of my other choices, first.

Glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cmdruhura
Review:
I don't know. A Torch Nova Burst seems a bit too quick and merciful for The Circle members. They really should have more time to think about the retribution they are going to receive for their crimes. I mean that when they finally end up in Hell, they should actually be grateful be there instead of remaining at Xander's tender mercies.
Comments from author:
True enough, but why waste any more time when you know they're going to be suffering for eternity after you snuff them out?

There are many, much more important things to do - like lunch, catching the afternoon cartoons, and other far more enjoyable things he could be doing. ;-)
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [12 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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