read it again and you know what. I still love it. Can't help wanting to read a chapter where Bruce, Damian, Dick and Alfred will find the letter Liz wrote about the restaurant. Boy mascot/Red Robin explaining that Liz thinks it's not fair not having a restaurant here that boy mascot present and why she didn't sent the letter because it would be unfair to the owner of the restaurant because of the attacks it will receive because of the name.
Well, that explains where that nick-name came from. But does her new world have a "Red Robin" chain of restaurants or is the joke such an inside joke that he doesn't even get it?
Comments from author:
There is a chain of restaurants. It may be a small chain in her new world but it’s there.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Quite short, it is, but do not fear! Your fic I did admire. You style was sharp and crystal clear. The words were filled with fire.
To watch Buffy run round and round, it made my heart delight! I think that bird is hospital bound: There's gonna be a fight!
Not for the stalking - myself, I'd use mace! - (Did he while she undressed?!?) But call her a damsel once more to her face Then we'll see who's distressed!
I took quite a shine, to your final line. It made me snort and giggle, even give my chair a wiggle. Your main storyline is so twisted and dark it makes this outtake really hit the mark. I hope you keep these little moments going, and this classic flirtation showing. 'Cause no matter what Robin thinks, we all know the truth, wink wink.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Nice rhyming!
Review By [DeepRed] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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