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Review of chapter "A kidnapping at a wrong time" from locard
Review:
I love these stories, and I so hope you will keep them going and not drop them like so many other writers seem to do.
Review By [locard] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A kidnapping at a wrong time" from bradsan
Review:
Read it again and I still enjoy reading it. I always wonder how old Buffy really is. She spent almost an hour or more in a Hell dimension in LA. The people they find were old after one or two days. Her stay in heaven was longer that her time away from earth and now 6 or 7 hours in the limbo where time goes faster. So I wonder how old Buffy really is and how those hours influence the grow spurt those twin will get.

They do know she is pregnant and not ill. You can still do a lot of stuff without harming the babies even training and working. Your body warns you when you are doing to much. It's much healthier to still do things only not that intensive she normally do So she can still do things except fighting and going on a mission. Thank god for Buffy twins always come early because other wise she would become nuts. "LOL"

longing for a update on this side.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A kidnapping at a wrong time" from Netchka
Review:
Cool chapter. Looking forward to reading more side pieces. :-)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A kidnapping at a wrong time" from bradsan
Review:
I love the stories but this chapter I love most. Thanks for writing. I love you brought Anubis in it. I hope you will show the Minni's and Han face when Anubis shows his real size and how tender he is with Buffy. They won't believe what they are seeing.
You could scare Robin with our "little" doggy could be fun. You know putting the big bad dog behind him and Robin screaming like a little girl when turns around and sees the dog.

Love it and good writing as always.
Comments from author:
I had a lot of fun writing this chapter.

Oringinally it was just an idea of a shock factor which started to extend and also touching on the Dawn getting kidnapped again thing. But then I thought about Anya and I wanted to bring her back it! I loved Xander and Anya together they just fit and it kind of became after that and I kept on writing and it just became one big chapter.

I loved the thought of Anubis, I love dogs and I wanted an animal for Buffy, but she didn't strike me as the type to just go to a pet store or go to a shelter, plus I thought a Demon dog works for her :D

This chapter was me playing around. :)

I love that you loved it! :D
Review By [bradsan] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A kidnapping at a wrong time" from kittenpoker
Review:
Glad you're back and hopefully doing better!
Comments from author:
:) Thanks! If I cant get everything together you should have a chap of the past comes back by tomo. :D
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Letty part 7" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
very good read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading!!! :D
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Letty part 7" from Nightscream
Review:
Sooooo now that that's settled...Will Dom be meeting "the guys" from work? That would be interesting.
Comments from author:
As much as it would've been fun to do so, it will be explained in the next chap of the Past comes back why he can't. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letty part 7" from bradsan
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You know I forgot the part with the struggling with the younger slayer. I hope you will write that will solve that problem in this story or the other one. Would serve them right. It's never good when they aren't showing respect to somebody who saves their asses several times before and after they were called. I mean saving the world and nobody knows.

You did really good with this chapter, love it.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letty part 5" from bradsan
Review:
great job, good writing.

can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it! :)
Review By [bradsan] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letty part 5" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
excellent

can't wait for more
Comments from author:
:D Thnak you!
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tristan" from HananeELmokkadem
Review:
Loved it. Thanks for the update.
Hanane
Comments from author:
Thanks! :D
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letty part 4" from bradsan
Review:
love it but I hope you won't forget the first story.

I have to confess that I wished you finished that one first before you started this one. Not that I don't like this one. I do, a lot if you ask me, but the first one has my priority to read first. This one I had read after the first one now I'm reading both at the same time and I'm scared you will forget the first story.

good writing and good story.
Comments from author:
Nahh, I promise I'm working on the other one. I'm just a bit stuck on the next part. I actually have the chapter afterwards done. So once I get the next chapter out it will flow better.

But anyways I wrote this last year when the Fast Five bug hit me. Only thing to do is editing and changin parts that won't fit anymore. So the next few chapters here will probably come faster than the Past.

But thanks for reviewing!!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Genovese" from Shadowman
Review:
Good second story to the series I am looking forward to more of it.
Comments from author:
:D Thank you!
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Genovese" from nightshadowlife
Review:
lol confused me at first but loved the chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I should have written int he beginning that it's different, but this family needs to be introduced before going further ;)
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letty part 3" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
interesting chapter.

Is John Jax's dad, the man that lost clay and emma's daughter or am i grasping at straws?

can't wait for the next installment

Edit: thanks that clears up my confusion.
Comments from author:
Nope, John has nothing to do with Charming... Well not yet, but he's past isn't tied to the Sons. Interesting way to go though...

Truth be I'm still trying to decided on John, either keeping him as an orginal character or finding some character on a show that fits he's profile, at the moment no one fits he's profile. So he's an origianl character.

Thanks for reviewing :)
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
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