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LetomoReview:
Very nice story. I especially liked the bit at the end, showing the original timeline, and the altered one from his changes to the timeline.
Thanks for sharing it!
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Letomo] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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spkReview:
Definitely interesting. So unique. :)
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spk] • Date [6 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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starshinedownReview:
ooooh. I really, really like.
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starshinedown] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
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NutsContractReview:
This is one of the most confusingly awesome stories. Very interesting, but I wish I knew more about the details of what was going on in both verses (they split, right?).
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it even if it was confusing! Yeah, at the end there it was how he met Dawn in the unchanged future and how he meets her in the new future. She knows him in the new future because she met him in 2003, so she's been waiting for him to be old enough so she can meet him again.
Um. I hope that helped? :D
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NutsContract] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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HarmMarieReview:
Loved this.
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HarmMarie] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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WildForceReview:
Brilliant! I love the ending, showing how close and how far his two worlds were. Thank you.
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WildForce] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
