Review of chapter "Reckless" from GarnetAvi
I came across this on the random, unreviewed story link and thought "Why not?", but with the very confusing summary and reading I discovered this is from the middle of a series. You should either link these stories properly as a series or make them chapters of one story as they are obviously one continuous tale. The summaries should include more information that the part number if they remain separate stories as well.
Review By [GarnetAvi
] • Date [15 Nov 09] • Not Rated