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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from FinalGuardian
Review:
A very nicely done crossover, can't wait for the time for Xander to pull out some of the more...lethal toys he got from Kildar.
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from kffs
Review:
Super fun and interesting!
Review By [kffs] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from agnar
Review:
This chapter was about 90% pointless, since it was just a retread of canon. Only part worth you writing was the early discussion of the assassins and the phone call to spike, the rest was pointless.
Comments from author:
Sorry you feel that way.
Review By [agnar] • Date [16 Mar 14] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from SpacedCadet
Review:
You got both the Buffy and Kildar stuff right...and then stopped writing!

More PLEASE.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliment. Yes, I AM still alive, and no, this story ISN'T dead. I've just been distracted by real life and other projects.

I think I should be posting more chapters soon, so please, watch this space!

Thanks again: reviews keep me motivated.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [20 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Traveler
Review:
Just thanks and more please!
Comments from author:
You're welcome ... Keep an eye out, I should have more written and posted soon.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [27 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from trongod
Review:
I'M BACK!!! And once again re reading this Masterpiece - please note the capital there! - and can't but help thinking once again Mike fully briefed Katya about the Hellmouth and the dangers thereof - after all, the only thing worse than Cottontail is a Vampiress Cottontail with all he goodies...

Also, she was definitely testing Xander, I think, in the Bronze to see his reactions. What her conclusions are, we may never know, or she might actually tell Mike during debrief - she's too damn smart not to have some and even smarter to hold back when she knows he possible outcomes of the Hellmouth being attacked.

Xander has been integrating Mike's memories and experiences for a month or so, so there's probably a lot left to go through, but I can NOT see him neglecting false IDs and then getting into various systems as a certified weapons dealer/ carrier, just to reduce the possibilities of future problems transporting his stash all the way from L.A. as well as setting up several safehouses in and around SunnyHell for him and the gang. As a part of this and his developing relationship with Cordelia, I can see them training together whenever they can - and can keep the smoochies down to a minimum - so firearms and tactics can start being taliked about and developed; Cordelia's NOT stupid, from all we've seen, she's in just about every class as Willow and/or Xander, and we know they're in the Advanced Placements classes themselves. Mainly I want Cordelia to get a better chance at growing into the person we saw so briefly before Whedon & Co. screwed the pooch in canon...

Kendra - it makes little, if any, sense that Xander, having seen how she reacts and how she had been abused/trained, would just let it go, knowing what lies in store for her if no one helps her. I'd think he'd get a hold of Mike or even have talked to Katya as well first off and gotten the Kildar to take steps. While eventually talking to Mr. Zabuto with sledgehammers is an excellent idea, Xander is the type to prefer not having to do so /after/ Kendra is murdered by the Council and their moronic... actually that's too nice a term for it... plans and ideas.

Besides, Mike already thinks the Slayers need a new mentor, why not start with the Jamaican beauty and go from there!?! This way we get to see the two getting the additional help they need while the Council is wondering why so many of their older members are dieing off these days... After all, Mike has several ins with Her Majesty's government, starting with MI -5 and -6, IIRC, and going through the P.M..... {mwahahahaha!!! "accidents' on the roadways, the Tube, out riding... so /many/ possibilities...}
Review By [trongod] • Date [8 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Delkatar
Review:
Great story!:D
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [5 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Greywizard
Review:
Just re-read the whole story again, and have to tell you again how much I enjoyed the story.

Hopefully, we'll see more of this in the near future.

I'm even willing to trade a chapter of any story you want updated for another chapter of this one. ;-)

Anyway, thanks for sharing this with us.
Comments from author:
Tempting: I'd love to see another chapter of 'Heirs' or 'Prophecies' ...

More should be coming soon. How soon is up to my muse, the fickle witch ...
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [5 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from grd
Review:
Very happy to see another chapter. Mike knows how to make warriors happy, new toys.
Review By [grd] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from LFW
Review:
Another great chapter
Thanks
And I agree that Cottontail is scary and better off the Hellmouth
Hoping for more
Review By [LFW] • Date [16 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from deusexsububi
Review:
Way back when, tenhawk touched on this same series, but didn't really provide a lot of background. I'm very glad you did. You have an awesome writing style, keep it up!
Comments from author:
I loved that extension of his SEAL Team 13 series, and wish he'd finish it. Glad you're enjoying.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from borgrabbit
Review:
Nice to see a new chapter! How about a pistol with incendiary rounds or hollow points with wood bits in the hollow?
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from CPTSkip
Review:
I was so happy to see another update to your wonderful story. You write good stuff. What makes your story even better is your "Mike" part is just as good as the BtVS parts. I would have loved to see Cottontail go up against a vampire, I'm not sure which would have run away screaming in terror, but I did like how you characterized her. And please bring Kendra back someday. Her relationship with Xander was both sweet and sexy. All in all, this is a great story and I hope you continue to update it regularly. Thanks for the fun.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from LordCorwin
Review:
Welcome back and good update .. :)
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Not Rated
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