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Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from ebony
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I so hope you continue with the Wonderland AU, I ran across this on someone else's recommendation page and loved it from the start.
Review By [ebony] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from hpssslashfan
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Awesome, can't wait to see where you take the next installment.
Review By [hpssslashfan] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from RelapseWarrior
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You, are like, my hero. I mean, any one who can dream up a relationship so godamned screwy (and I really hope you weren't writing from example or you really would have the domestic dispute to end all domestic disputes) has to be superior in some indefinable, probably unhealthy way, right?
Or maybe that's just me.
Huh.
Anyway, the plot is amazing, the technicalitys you managed to magick into place even more so. I mean, the details were mind blowing and captivating, the way you captured each character adding to both fandoms in a way that should be legendary. This story was written so that it invokes a large range of feelings, a truely impressive feat compared to the thousands of other, shallow stories that make us all wonder were work ethic has gone. This is a gem in both the Buffy and the Riddick verses and I truely appreciate the fact that I was able to stumble upon it.
Fond Regards,
Relapse Warrior
Review By [RelapseWarrior] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from RedCalypso
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I have devoured White Rabbit and Red Queen and I am really looking forward to the next sequel. Riddick and Xander are beyond hot together, dysfunctional or not. I find myself wondering how Riddick will figure out where Xander went, and what will happen when a war fleet appears over Earth...

Just a little thing I've noticed. Sometimes you'll repeat the same word or phrase several times in a paragraph. The word massive comes to mind.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alice! A childish story take" from Kalliza
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I just found this series, and I loved it. Aside from the biologist in my having a conniption about the whole male anatomy somehow gestating and birthing a child, of course. The whole "primes are the child bearers, regardless of gender" doesn't necessarily bother me, but I'd need an explanation along the lines of the male primes being somehow hermaphroditic, and then maybe how it is that no one ever noticed Xander was. It's something I try not to dwell on, though. However, if at some point you feel like thinking through and giving an explanation for that, that'd be all sorts of awesome (including the reason he doesn't have breasts, even shortly after pregnancy--it'd be weird, yeah, but all organisms I know of have SOME mechanism for feeding offspring, even for a short period of time).

Regardless, I'm willing to continue to ignore the screaming biologist in the back of my head to read more of this series, even without the explanations. I LIKE the story itself, and sincerely hope to read about what happens after Faith wishes Xander back. I imagine Riddick'll do that whole pushing the ships to their limits thing that was mentioned as being possible, and since they're really close he might even make it in only a few Universal Months, I'd think. Maybe even before Xander gives birth! Now, Xander's gonna have to work to keep him from killing his way to him, and perhaps Vengeance Demons (or whatever granted that wish) will need to be annihilated.

Also, I'm really curious about how Faith and the rest of the Scoobies managed to deal with all the issues that came forth. Did Kendra even come back to Sunnydale? And if she did, did Buffy or Angelus kill her rather than Dru? Did she kill those two, or did Faith, or are they still running around? And if their vamp selves ARE running around, does that mean Buffy's soul went to the Underverse like it was supposed to, for Xander to be able to talk to her? I imagine if Angelus and/or Buffy aren't dead, Xander'll just open Furyian hunting season on all vamps, with the explicit direction of making sure both of 'em fit into a vacuum cleaner as quickly as possible.

In addition, what happened with the Mayor, and the Initiative, and Glory? All of those enemies were not the result of something the Scoobies did, they were already there. The Scoobies just dealt with the threats, and Xander was instrumental in the destruction of all of them with the possible exception of Glory. So was Willow's magic, in fact. Basically, I REALLY want to know which of the old enemies are still around 18 years later, and how those that aren't ('cause it looks quite like the Mayor was in fact defeated) came to be dealt with.

Hoping that this series gets continued, and soon!
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from starfire
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I cannot wait for any updates you have for this series..and... I think faith REALLY REALLY messed up...
Review By [starfire] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from starfire
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please tell me there's another story or something coming out..you are defiently a new favorite author..
Review By [starfire] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from trudy
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Really enjoyed this story and the preceeding one, would love to read more if you're planning on writing any more.
Review By [trudy] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from JadeObsession
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awws, so no sequel to this one, then?!
Review By [JadeObsession] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from Dardrian
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This is completely amazing. I really love your characters, they feel true to the originals. The way you've blended the two fictional universes is really something, they fit together really believably. I'd really love to read more in this series.
Review By [Dardrian] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from TakeThatUsername
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Okay, HOW did you manage to give us another entire story, children, plot twists, scars and all, and still manage to leave us on the same cliffhanger?!? I loved it, of course. ;) I loved the characterization and the steadily decreasing (but still there!) Teen!Xan moments like, "I really should be more concerned about the whole canabalism thing, shouldn't I?" It gives just enough of the original Xander we love, while still showing his journey and how much he's changed. The little tidbits/snippets of Sunnydale life have the potential to be major awkward points, but you somehow manage a flawless continuation, and for that, I envy you greatly. I've rambled on here quite a bit, so I'll wrap it up after saying, "Where's the rest, dang it? I need more!"
Review By [TakeThatUsername] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from (Past Donor)RavenWoodbane
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Sequal ... Sequal ... Sequal ... Sequal ... Sequal. OMG I just finished reading the series, and it's funny cause I've seen this story in updates, but I kept ignoring cause I've read some pretty crap Riddick/BTVS stories .... But this is AWESOME ... And just wanting to know when the next will be available
Comments from author:
Hee! Thank you!

There will be a sequel, not quite yet cause I still have to finish writing it, but there definitely will be one! I'm really glad to hear that you like these stories - I started writing them because I loved the idea of the pairing, and wanted to have something that was more than just short stories out there. I'm glad to hear you like it!
Review By [(Past Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from Genuka
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I love this series! I can't wait to see what else you do with them. ^^
Comments from author:
Thanks! I really hope the next story is as fun as the first two!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [6 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from msdarque
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Intriguing, wonderful story. I truly enjoyed reading it. :D
Xander really has a great life, despite how he got there and some circumstances. He and Riddick are perfect for each other.
Hope they someday reach Earth too...
Congratulations and kudos!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!

I like to think of it as that somehow the verse itself conspired to get Xander and Riddick together.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pluck'd in a far off land" from Chaoskitten
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I totally can't wait for the next part XD and why do I think that the riddick will be taking the quick rout XD
Comments from author:
Riddick will totally be taking a quick route, his mate just disappeared! (I might like writing possessive Riddick a lot....)

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter!
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Not Rated
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