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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Shadowman
Review:
Very nice story. I am glad to see in the reviews that you do have a sequel almost done.
I look forward to reading it when it is posted.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from aussiemel
Review:
This is great. I loved this. You need to do a sequal, I would love to see more set in this universe. Keep up the great work.
Comments from author:
I'm almost done with the sequel! It's got to get through beta, of course, but keep an eye out. It shouldn't be too long.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Letomo
Review:
ONly ever seen the Doctor who crossover with SJA, but this was an enjoyable story. Even with the little I had picked up, you made sure I knew the characters, well done! I hope there is more in the future - this looks like a nice cross-universe.

If you are looking for future story ideas, well, there's always Dawn and Luke meeting/having and adventure with Jack - or showing the 'Everything Changes' part.
Comments from author:
I'm nearly finished the sequel, and it does have Jack, and something you could interpret as Everything Changes if you were feeling charitable - it's going to beta in the next few days, so keep an eye out, it shouldn't be too long.

And I'm really glad you could follow along all right.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from theraceskong
Review:
This was an awesome story. I really liked the interactions between Dawn, Connor, Luke, Clyde, and Rani. I can see them all being good friends in the future. The budding romance between Dawn and Luke was really cute too. Great job.
Comments from author:
I'm not so good at actual romance, so I'm glad you enjoyed what I had here!
Review By [theraceskong] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from maxthehobbit
Review:
I have no idea what you crossed this with, but it was interesting, maybe a British series? You had enough filler so that I could figure out what was going on and you do Dawn really good. Haven't ever watched "Angel" so I had no idea how Conner acted, but he seemed interesting. If you decide to write a sequel, I'll definitely read it.
Thanks for the entertainment!
Comments from author:
It's the Sarah Jane Adventures, a Dr Who spin off. I'm glad you were able to follow it well enough!

Connor is a complicated case - he was fairly anti-social and mildly psychopathic for pretty much all of his time on the show, but when he was written off his timestream was reset and he became much more mellow and chilled out. That's the Connor I was using. It's worth watching Angel if you liked Buffy - it's a bit rocky at first but it turns out really good.

I'm glad you enjoyed! I'm working on the sequel so we'll see what happens.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Chaoskitten
Review:
You know- we totally need a side chap of meeting Jack.
Comments from author:
I'd like to, but I'm not very sure of Jack! He's tricky to write, because he's cheesy but not really cheesy, you know? He's in the sequel, but so far only over the phone.

If you'd like to write that side chap, go ahead! :D
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
A most interesting tale and a very nice couple. But I can not fot the life of me imagine Jack being thrown by somebody taking him up on one of his flirtations. He'd just chalk up 'One Slayer, check, next time get the red-headed witch too...'

Thank you very much for writing
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for commenting!

Kennedy's still underage - at least in the UK, where this is set - and in my head that's what threw Jack. Not that a beautiful, athletic girl was flirting back. :D Jack's a lot of things, but not a lech.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
And so it ends,
Gracefully it parts,
And people await ...
For what comes next.

Anyway great chapter and great overall story. Question, are you going to post this on a teaspoon and an open mind (http://www.whofic.com/)? Anyway, In thanks - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gg3kgmAeiVI
Comments from author:
Oh I didn't think of Teaspoon! Think they'd like it over there?
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Kremer
Review:
This was an interesting and readable story.

A few tenths' rating off because you assumed in the first chapters of the story that the readers were already familiar with the "Sarah Jane Chronicles" series. I wasn't, and was pretty confused.
(It's to your credit that you kept explaining enough through the story to keep me informed enough about the who's/what's/why's so I wasn't so confused to abandon it.)

This last chapter was very well built - a good ending to this story, yet leaving enough unknowns plus a plotable direction to allow more sequels in the future.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you kept reading and it made sense! I'm sorry it confused you to begin with - it's a challenge response so I was really only writing for me and the challenger, and I'm so bowled over by the reviews! Thanks for sticking with it.
Review By [Kremer] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Taisy
Review:
I really enjoyed this and wouldn't say no to a continuation, if you were so inclined. If not, it is just perfect as is.

Thank you for the exciting read.
Comments from author:
I'm working on the sequel, but we'll see what happened.

Thank you for the comment!
Review By [Taisy] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from mandac
Review:
I absolutely loved this story. I really hope you have plans for a sequel or at least a few one shots with Luke and Dawn. There's not nearly enough fic with BtVS crossed with the Who-verse and even less with SJA so to find one is good but to find a great one thats well written is FANTASTIC! :D Or if you don't have plans for a sequel, maybe a spin-off with the gang working with Torchwood, I could see many a fun things going on there, or even the Doctor meeting Dawn when he comes to get the SJA crew for their trip in the TARDIS and recognizing the key and sort of kidnapping Dawn for the trip as well. Either way well done and I look forward to your next fic.
Comments from author:
I'm working on a sequel - I may or may not have stolen one of the ideas you listed - and we'll see what happens. :D
Review By [mandac] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from SlowMercury
Review:
This story was adorable, and I appropriately adored it. Connor and Dawn and Luke and Sky and everyone were wonderful. I hope you do write a sequel (not that this story is in any way incomplete) -- I just want to see Jack Harkness and the Council. And Luke and Dawn dating. And the Alien Slayer team. And more of everyone, really. Thanks for this delightful work.
Comments from author:
I've thought of a great twist for the Alien Slayers! Hopefully I can make it work. We'll see. Thanks for this fabulous comment.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Rod
Review:
Excellently done! Thank you for a very enjoyable story, and congratulations on herding a large number of characters without any of them feeling wrong.
Comments from author:
Yay, I'm glad they didn't feel wrong! :D
Review By [Rod] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
That was a lot of fun - but I'm surprised Luke didn't get one of those alarms for Dawn, who might be even more at risk.

Good story anyway!
Comments from author:
Dawn's stable, they talked about it. Otherwise he probably would have gotten one for her.

Thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from PATM
Review:
"I foiled a Nazi invasion of Germany," Clyde said loudly. "Weren't for me, we'd all be speaking German." The previous sentence sounds like a alternate earth experience that no one in the BTVS timeline would ever learn about in school. In actuality he sounds like a crackpot. Did you mean to write "I foiled a Nazi invasion of England,"? In either case you have negated the triumph of the English experience of WW 2. I am enjoying the story very much. Overall a great read.
Comments from author:
Bah, can't believe we didn't catch that! Thanks, I've fixed it. :D Glad you're enjoying.
Review By [PATM] • Date [29 May 12] • Not Rated
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