Review By [spk] • Date [8 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family bonding" from deathgeonous
Review:
Cute and fun. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family bonding" from Neverwillmini
Review:
Looking forward to more. I know your Buffy has cut ties to the Scoobies, but what about Dawn an Faith ( who supported her)? If Dawn was made from her Blood, is she a demi-god too?
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [5 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
There are a few words that are spelled correctly but are not really right for the context of the sentence. ex: the instead of they, sought instead of sorted, etc. Sometimes spelling and grammar checkers will miss some - reading the story out loud can be helpful in catching anything that slips past the automated systems.
I just can't wait to see what happens between Lorne and Buffy. Also, I just love how she is able to make sure McKay can't talk back since he is afraid of her. It was interesting that Woolsey was so respectful of Buffy. It makes me wonder what he knows about her.
Review By [danielbuffyfan] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Not Rated