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Review of chapter "When a Man Loves a Woman" from Harry
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Looks like its getting close to making announcement of wedding bans. And remember Draco: You harm Dawn, her sister and her friends will make your life VERY interesting!
Comments from author:
I agree with you there, of course. And thanks for your nice feedback as well. It helps me to write more stories and make more photo manips, too. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Master and Slave" from Harry
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This would be a interesting world. Dawn, having to keep her head down, doing what her master tells her to do without question, until she is taken in by Draco. In time, love would bloom, but they would have to keep it quiet to avoid trouble from others in the community.
Comments from author:
I couldn't agree more there, too. :) And thanks for the nice feedback as well. It really helps me a lot. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Will Always Love You" from Harry
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Well, its good to see that Dawn and Draco tied the knot. And, since there are no signs of violence, everything went off without a hitch. I hope that they have many years of wedded bliss together.
Comments from author:
I agree. And thanks for the nice feedback as well. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Key to My Heart" from Harry
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I think that if anyone could understand the mystic origins of Dawn, it would be Draco. Now, remember, treat this lady with respect. You don't not only will her sister kick your keister, but so will Red, Faith and their friends!
Comments from author:
I agree with you there, of course. And thanks for the awesome feedback as well. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Walk Through the Fire" from Harry
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This song fits in so well with what was going on during this season of Buffy! You had Buffy, trying to deal with not only her return from the dead, Dawn's kleptomania, and eventually, Willow going down the Dark Side. The song fits in so well. And I can see Draco working to help out when and where he can. And when Red starts down the Dark Path, call for HELP! He can call some of his allies, even contact some of Harry's allies as well. With a witch as powerful as Willow, you are going to need all the help you can get!
Comments from author:
I agree. And I can imagine Draco, with Buffy's permission, casting a spell on Dawn so that every time she tries to swipe something, especially at the Magic Box, she suddenly hears Draco's voice in her head telling her to think of something else... something good. And with Willow, I can see Draco calming her down before taking up the task of going after Warren himself.

Draco: No one asked your opinion, Warren... you filthy little Mudblood.
Warren: (looks shocked) What did you call me?
Draco: A Mudblood, Warren. That's what you are to me. You are also a foul, loathsome, evil little cockroach. (He then points his wand at Warren, who looks scared)
Willow (suddenly appears, along with Buffy, Anya, Xander and Dawn) Draco, you got him already. And what did you call him, exactly?
Draco: I called him a "Mudblood", of course. I also added that he is a "foul, loathsome, evil little cockroach" for good measure as well. (turns to Dawn and winks at her, causing her to smile and blush)

Anyway, thanks for the nice feedback. It means a lot to me, and also inspires me to write more stories and make more photo manips, too. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fantasy in Fire" from Harry
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Mallfoy, if you plan on dating Dawn Summers, you had best be on your best behavior. Her sister is a slayer, Faith is still out there, add in Willow, and you have some people that will HURT you if you misbehave with her!
Comments from author:
I agree with you there. :) And thanks for the awesome feedback as well. It really inspires and encourages me to write more, and make more photo manips as well. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Exchange of Letters" from Harry
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For once Malfoy, you did something RIGHT! But, you will still have to answer to Faith and Xander if you hurt her. And if you harm them, look out for Hurricane Willow!
Comments from author:
I agree, of course. :) And thanks for the awesome feedback as well. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Chance Encounter" from Harry
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Buffy may approve of Draco dating Dawn, but what about Draco's parents? With Dawn being a Muggle, they may not like it one bit!
Comments from author:
I couldn't agree more there. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Draco Malfoy Intrigued by Dawn Summers" from Harry
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Dawn, you might find him intriguing, but your friends are going to want to get to . . . know him better. Especially Aunt Faith. Malfoy is going to have a LOT of interrogation to go through!
Comments from author:
I agree... :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Put a Spell On You" from Harry
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EASY DRACO! You may have Dawn in your hands, but she has family and friends that would like a few words with you. And if they don't like what they hear, you are going to be in a WORLD OF PAIN!
Comments from author:
I agree. Thanks for the feedback. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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