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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Drawling the Lines" from Wise
Review:
I don't understand why they are even considering using these pendants when there are literally a hundred better options out there. Someone is attacking Buffy magically. This is out of the Bat Clan's normal sphere of influence. Call in Zatanna. Or Dr. Fate. Or John Constantine if you want to keep things street level. If they absolutely must use the pendants, have one of the above (or any of the many other mystical heroes) set up some sort of mystical contraceptive to counteract that effect of the pendant. It wouldn't be difficult.

Hell, considering just how often mystical pregnancies seem to be a problem for female heroes, I would be genuinely surprized if functional charms to prevent any and all pregnancies weren't readily available at the local magic shop. "Oh, you got something that magically messes with fertility and sex drives and makes normal birth control useless? We got something for that on Aisle 2."
Review By [Wise] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Drawling the Lines" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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ooh a BUffy idea! looking forward to finding out what it is. this is an excellent series even though I don't know all the characters it has been enjoyable meeting them. I hope you continue again soon : )
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Drawling the Lines" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
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I hate you. Fervently. Why did you have to leave it there??????? Super duper can't wait for more!

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Drawling the Lines" from HMaxMarius
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Fun... I'm making a run through it with my pen... I'll try to email to you sometime this evening.

Meanwhile, I'm trying to imagine Alfred as the balloonist behind the draperies. ;)

edit: 10:45pm(edt)7/29/14 Beta copy sent via e-mail. Let me know if it doesn't arrive.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [29 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Drawling the Lines" from raxadian
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Liz is right, and honestly, the Pedants can't be the best option, too bad they don't know how to contact Doctor Fate. Also Liz is not ready to have kids.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: At Razor's Edge" from lunargoddess
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So I just reread the entire series of stories. This is well written and interesting. I loved Barbara calling Liz a rookie, as she will be in for a surprise. I hope you find the inspiration to finish this story. I keep imagining Whistler visiting the Bat clan and explaining a few things, and Liz being very annoyed with that.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Don't worry, more is coming soon. I have chapter nine almost done. I'm hoping to have it out by the end of the month.
Review By [lunargoddess] • Date [18 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: At Razor's Edge" from AsarStar
Review:
Any chance there's more of this coming? (Hoping so!)
Comments from author:
More is coming. Promise!
Review By [AsarStar] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: At Razor's Edge" from FireWolfe
Review:
This really needs an update and Buffy should so not have to be babysat. Yes she needs to relearn her skills and perhaps learn police procedures but she no beginner and I would so love to see her save Batmans arrogant ass.
Comments from author:
An update is coming. My goal is to have the next chapter out by the end of the month and chapter ten is two-thirds the way done so you shouldn't have such a long wait again.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: At Razor's Edge" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Highly interesting. I do hope for more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. My goal is to get the next chapter out by the end of the month.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [15 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: At Razor's Edge" from Arkaedia
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Read your other new stories. The one with Buffy as Sam and Dean's little sister has definite possibilities. And I'd like to see where you take a SPN/BtVS/SG1 cross. But really the note that you were half done with the next chapter of this baby had me giddy, so I re-read the series...again.

You know what I realized midway through this chapter? I was waiting for Lizzy to go off on the other chosen. "I'm alone, I don't have my shield, everybody is taking my power! Boohoo." When was Buffy ever aloud time to wine like that? She was generally being told that having anybody at her side would just get them killed. Seriously, I felt like she should tell the old chosen that if she didn't like being powerless, then she should Slayer up and Take. It. Back! No friends. No family. No hope. When the chips are down the slayer stands alone. And Wins. No whiners permitted.

Then somewhere along the line I realized something. If the theory that the chosen in this dimension was created to stop the demons from invading from Buffy's dimension was correct, then Buffy's chosen line predates this dimension's entire lineage. After all what else would the demons have been fleeing from? Buffy's not a NEW line, she's the ORIGINAL line. Wow is this council about to get a schooling.

I hope Babs has her cameras running during the next fight. Even weakened Liz is going to unleash havoc among the assassins. Also as her trainer Dick is going to need to see the video. Her training is all Head and Heart: How best to end the undead. This doesn't translate well to an "I don't kill humans" policy. She's having to think her way through every fight. No relying on her instincts or she'll end up with an oops like Faith did. Nightwing is going to have to adjust all of her kata to something less lethal and drill her in it until it's her first response in a fight. I do not envy him this.

See what you do to me! I need the next chapter!
Review By [Arkaedia] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: At Razor's Edge" from raxadian
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Relax, at least is not a Monday.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: Counters" from raxadian
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I wonder how she will react to the bonded pendants.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Connections" from raxadian
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Honesty Buffy, haven't you learned to not trust things from strangers?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [8 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Revealing Shadows" from raxadian
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This is gonna backfire on the immortal somewhat.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [8 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Between the Lines" from raxadian
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Better new life? Yeah sure. Without her old memories and slayer powers, her new life would have ended being quite bad. They made her the Joker's daughter after all. And they made her powers magical. No wonder some call them Jerk that Be.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [8 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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