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Review of chapter ""Hello Class"" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
did you get lost somewhere along the way? well, find your way back and finish this! It's worth the trouble.

blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Hello Class"" from Netchka
Review:
Interesting story. Can't wait for the next chapters to be posted. :-)
Comments from author:
I've had most of the next chapter in my head for months now, but severe depression, plus all sorts of RL issues keep me from having the time to do it. I'll try to get on it soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Netchka] • Date [13 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Hello Class"" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Hello Class"" from Cdog
Review:
Interesting. Things are certainly shaping up to be a House worthy episode.
Comments from author:
That was a big part of the idea; I'm trying to make it feel like a House episode, or at least get all the character voices right.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Hello Class"" from Mordare
Review:
Great chapters, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I have a general idea for the next chapter, maybe two.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Hello Class"" from Oxnate
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I'm just wondering when we're going to get back to that Slayer.
Comments from author:
We will get back to her, but she was just part of the set up, to get them into the area of the hospital.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Hello Class"" from hanahanachan
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ooo Some how I can't see Dawn being to happy with the group running a bunch of random tests on Xander... Update soon!
Comments from author:
I've kept that in mind.
Review By [hanahanachan] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Hello Class"" from AllenPitt
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Possibilities House doesn't know about: brief time spent as a hyena, might have picked something up? The whole Shumash indian thing (though the funny syphilis seems to have been 'it').. Hm, something he picked up from Anya maybe a disease that doesn't exist anymore... something demonic of course...
Poor Xander, he always has the worst luck in this sort of area.
Comments from author:
Yes, the syphilis is the leftover from the Shumash episode. I hadn't even thought of the hyena incident in relation to this.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Hello Class"" from msdarque
Review:
I just love House's classes! :D
Great chapter. Wonder which of those diagnoses (if any) are the correct one..?
Still hope they'll find what's wrong with Xander soon.
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Well, I know which one is correct. You - will just have to wait and see!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3 Doctors." from Kethric
Review:
Just one question. You classify Dawn as "petite" in Chapter 4. Can you explain to me how one is above average height (the opposite of petite), and yet can still manage to be petite? Not trying to be rude, or anything, but it seems that a better word should be used. Perhaps dainty? Delicate? Ethereal? My brain just seized when I read the sentence that described Dawn as petite, but above average in height. It's akin to describing water as dry, but wet.
Comments from author:
AHmm. Didn't mean to confuse like that. I was thinking more small-boned, skinny, not short. Petite, to me, means small, not short, and I was thinking in comparison to most of the women I have met, Michelle Trachtenberg is thinner and smaller-boned than them.
Review By [Kethric] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3 Doctors." from msdarque
Review:
Fun, intriguing chapter. Really liked it.
House at his best again.. scaring patients! ;)
I hope he can figure out what's wrong with Xander.
It was kinda foolish of me to think it would be so easy.. oh well, let the fun begin!
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Remember the 4th season? this is between episodes 2 and 3. So, it's that period. Right now, House is more focused on scaring his interns than the patient - patient scaring is just a bonus.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3 Doctors." from hanahanachan
Review:
tehe now for the confuse House game... Update soon!!
Comments from author:
Maybe. Though, realize, it could be the confuse the interns game. . .
Review By [hanahanachan] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3 Doctors." from DrDamage
Review:
Aaaaah, there's the housey goodness... errr, pucklike grumpiness, if that's not a too thoroughly mixed metaphor.
Comments from author:
This time he came in on cue!
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue." from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
New England:
"A region of the northeast United States consisting of the modern-day states of Maine, New Hampshire, Vermont, Massachusetts, Connecticut, and Rhode Island." (from Google)

___You wrote____

"Determining it was nearly straight North of her, in about the New England area of the US, she hit the speed-dial for Cleveland."



Please note: The fictional Princeton Plainsboro is in *New Jersey* as is Princeton University, which is, of course, a real place. Therefore, Willow thinking that the spell is in New England is just wrong if the slayer is in Princeton. Just thought you should know.

You could call it 'the North Eastern US' (least specific) or the Mid Atlantic or just 'New Jersey' (most specific). You can Google all of those with 'definition' to see what states they cover...

Blue
Comments from author:
I was actually trying to show that she wasn't as accurate as she thought, and didn't know the geography of the US as well as she thought. Sorry it didn't come across that way.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3 Doctors." from AllenPitt
Review:
Maybe it's time for Xander to stop doing field work and move into management or something. But hey. At least the syphilis is taken care of. That's a real turnoff when mention of it comes up while dating.
Comments from author:
I don't think Xander can make himself leave the field, and by this point, Giles knows it!

And, the story listing of this series is chronological, which I admit loses some of the suspence, but I hope it will still be an amusing story.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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