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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Eureka
Review:
So I wonder what Ginny is doing right now...You showed Bill and Ron, but not Ginny.
It would be so funny if all three (Harry, Fleur, and 'Moine) would get their kids and as a group drop the bomb that they are divorcing their "partners" and they are keeping the kids.
Sorry I had to put partners in "" as to be a partner you MUST work together. Ginny, Ron, and Bill have not worked together with their partners for quite some time if ever. IF a husband or wife actually loved and cared for their other half they would KNOW when they are upset and try to find out why like Fleur's family did!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [14 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from banditdoz
Review:
Fantastic I really feel their pain well done :D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [13 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from FireWolfe
Review:
Great piece and
complicated. I look forward to seeing where this will go. I do hope it ends up being a triad. I always liked that grouping for some odd reason. Loved Fluer and Hermione is one of my favorite characters in the series. Ron's not bad but as a match for her no way. He to immature and never would appreciate her skill set. He be a great husband to the right woman one who liked mothering and was willing to be a homemaker. But for Hermione its never a good match. I like her with Harry or in pairings. Anyway great work hope there is more soon.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Raider
Review:
I'm really liking how this story's going, cant wait to see the next fireworks event you're clearly building to.
Review By [Raider] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from banditdoz
Review:
Amazing AMAZING!!!
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from lordamnesia
Review:
I'm loving this story! Keep up the great work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from lordamnesia
Review:
I greatly enjoy this story, a real look at a possible future where everything isn't ok, where real life intruded into the fairy tail ending. Keep up the great work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [23 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
This story had a rocky start, with issues in grammar and spelling, and things like that, but I have to say, you've REALLY cleaned it up, and every subsequent chapter shows marked improvement in style, structure, and grammar.

Superlative job and fantastic improvement. Looking forward to the next chapter, so please write quickly! ^_^
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Do you think Harry, Hermione and Fleur might go for a 3-way marriage? Seriously, I am eager to read what happens with them!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
Hey, it's been awhile since I've seen you on here! Great chapter, and brillant concept as always. :D
Comments from author:
hey cloud thanks for the review, yeah I know I've been off a while except for the odd post. I've been ill for the last couple of weeks and still am, it has been a really bad time for me so fan fiction is not really high on my list at least where keeping up with my favs is concerned. I get a chapter done here and there but no where like I used too, I am just focusing on a few, so I apologies if I have missed a lot of your new work although I think you know I would like it if I had seen it. I hope to get back to normal soon. In the mean time take care

david
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from BrownFinderth
Review:
I rather think it is unfortunate that Fleur and Harry can not get together!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [28 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from proofreader
Review:
This could be the perfect opportunity to have Ron get caught by Harry or Fleur love potioning Hermione and it getting out that it is a Weasley (or more likely Prewitt) family tradition as a way to get a spouse they want. Nothing else would really explain that pairing anyway. You could avoid a lot of loose ends to tie up that way as to saving the reputations of the victims (Harry, Fleur, and Hermione) and in my honest opinion anyone who inescapably traps someone in a marriage (or in some cases even escapably) by using those methods (potions or other forms of mind control) would be a candidate for the ultimate escape clause. As in Till DEATH Do Us Part. I will admit to being a complete Ron Weasley ANTI-fan and enjoy reading about him dying in horrible or just horribly dumb ways (not that the dumb part is hard for the walking Darwin Award Candidate). And yes I can see stalker fan girl Ginny fighting tooth and nail to strip Harry of everything he owns in a divorce (that is, if she's not ALREADY trying to do that....).
This story could easily grow into a really good one and I'll keep an eye out for it for as long as the Ron/Hermione pairing is not implemented.
Review By [proofreader] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Raider
Review:
and another good story! nice start.
Review By [Raider] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Oh, my! For Harry and Fleur to be locked into marriages they wish they could end!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
Kudos on writing one of the more believable lemons in fanfiction.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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