Review of chapter "Willow's Explosion" from jujukittychick
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ack! i ran out of story! this is a really cool idea, i'm loving how it's all played out so far. and i can't wait to see how the xanders handle seeing each other or xander's reaction to seeing jesse alive again. hope you get around to updating this again soon :D
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Willow's Explosion" from LadySybyl
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Like the story...
Got any more to add? Please?
Review By [LadySybyl] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Willow's Explosion" from Genuka
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Good story so far.
You might want to take down the ^author's note^ chapter if you don't want the story to get taken down. Its already been put in quarantine by someone.
Review of chapter "Willow's Explosion" from DarthPayne
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I look forward to seeing what happens to the Cleveland house girls and Kennedy. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [25 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Intro to Dom's World" from DarkFaerieYumi
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XD Love it! More plz!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [14 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Intro to Dom's World" from huroivatrong
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Not a bad start. Kinda reads a little fast. I like the overall idea and Dom/Xander is one of my favorite pairings if that is where you are going with this. Hope to see more soon.
Review By [huroivatrong] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Intro to Dom's World" from msdarque
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Interesting story. I'd very much like to read more. :) Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Intro to Dom's World" from falsegod
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so far so good but really you should combine those into 1 chapter there just isn't enough meat for 2 but great for 1
Review By [falsegod] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Intro to Dom's World" from cannonfly
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Very engaging. Not sure I like the whole seeing aura bits, but I'll wait and see how it plays out to decide. Who are you going to send to straighten out the Stealing Slayer? And do we get to see how they do that? That sounds like it would be a riot. Also, how close have Dom and Xander gotten? Xander feels comfortable making off hand comments about "his girls'" reaction times, Xander knows where Dom works, and feels comfortable just dropping in unexpectedly, so I'm assuming pretty close. Wonder how they got from a car part website to being so close? Can't wait to see how this plays out!
Great job!
Review By [cannonfly] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
