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Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
I just found and read this so far. I hope you haven't abandoned it. I really enjoy the Clark Buffy pairings and am enjoying them being younger too. wishing for more.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Ravenmore
Are you still alive? I was wondering. :)
Review By [Ravenmore] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from ThePureOne
Nice chapter chapter keep em coming please
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Kindleflame
Nice chapter! Not happy Buffy and Clark broke up but I understand to a point. Buffy is keeping a lot of secrets from Clark. I hope she will be honest with him soon because that is not fair to Clark considering she knows everything about him. Am I right?

I think you should do one chapter for each episode. Two would just drag it out. Plus I like the big chapters! :)

Update soon and have a great weekend! :D
Comments from author:
Yeah i was so torn about breaking them up or not, but you were right. My main reason was that Buffy's really secretive and remember in this it ws after her and Angel broke up, and we have yet to see the real reason why, so she has trouble letting people in. You have a point about the episode chapters so i'll take that into consideration, it really depends on how much time i have once school starts back up. Thanks for reading!
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from RHatch
i like it...
Comments from author:
thanks for reading and reviewing
Review By [RHatch] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Ravenmore
Great fight scene! Well one thing is apparent. Clark needs to learn how to fight! Perhaps Buffy can teach him since she is already something of a expert?
I want to see Buffy fly soon! She is already floating. She is almost there!

Update soon! :D
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like the fight scene, i wasn't too sure of it when i wrote it so i was glad to get that feedback. I already have some great training sessions between the two already written. Think Buffy and Angel or Buffy and Spike training, lol. And she'll fly as soon as i can find the right time to put it in. I know it shouldn't take that long to learn how, but i want it to be such a perfect moment that it may be a little while. thanks for reading and reviewing
Review By [Ravenmore] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from weap
Part of me feel that Gile should know that Buffy and Clark are aliens but after reading what he plan to do when they lie to him about the meteor rocks, I have a feeling that they might just try make them have more babies or clones just to have more fighters x-x;
anyway update soon can't wait to see what happens next both story and character wise :D
Comments from author:
deciding whether or not to have Giles know the truth was probably the hardest decision to make in this chapter. I kind of figured that this is still beginning of season 1 Giles so he isn't the watcher who saved Buffy from the council so many times. He might know in the future, but he has to develop before i even consider it. thanks for reading and reviewing
Review By [weap] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from ThePureOne
Can I just say this story makes me feel all giddy inside lol...I hope its nowhere near the end ....and the fight scene was kinda funny ...great chapter
Comments from author:
i am so glad that you like this story so much! and don't worry it isn't anywhere near being done yet! My goal is to eventually rewrite the entirety of both series give or take episodes here and there so it will take a while. I'm also so happy you liked the fight scene because i was so scared it wasn't good. There will be many more when they start to develop more powers, so i figured the first one would be good lighthearted before they start to actually fight or real and not for fake due to extraneous circumstances.
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from ThePureOne
I love this story I hope u can keep it up and finish it. :)
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Kindleflame
Please please update soon!! I want to see Buffy kicks Clark's ass! :)
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Ravenmore
YES YES YES!!! Buffy is flying! Thank you thank you! This is great! Hopefully she will be flying and soaring in the clouds in no time! I can't wait until she grabs Clark and takes off with him protesting the whole way! (laughing)

I am so happy that for once Clark is not the most powerful around. I get so tired of reading stories where Clark is the strongest and toughest and all the girls are second rate. Talk about a double standard! I call it sexist!

You mentioned Buffy may or may not be the slayer. Please I am imploring you let her be! She wouldn't be truely Buffy without being the slayer! I want Buffy to be stronger then Clark! Is that so much to ask?

I will cry if she is not! I mean it real tears will fall! :(
Comments from author:
Trust me i am going to love writing her flying, Buffy will never want to walk And i agree that Clark is the most powerful too often and it dos feel so sexist sometimes. girls can be super too! But Clark will still be powerful, just not as much s Buffy. And with the slayer thing you'll just have to wait and see what will happen. I just have to write it down and trust me it will be bittersweet.
Review By [Ravenmore] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Knightmare
Great chapter! The upcoming fight should be interesting between Buffy and Clark. My money's on Buffy though due to her greater experience in fighting techniques and background in martial arts which is extensive due to her being the slayer. All slayers know how to fight once called. It's what they were born to do. Clark right now doesn't know the first thing about this type of fighting. He may know boxing so perhaps he will use that. Hoped you liked my insights. Update soon and take care. :D
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! And i wouldn't be placing bets just yet, who knows Clark may surprise you. And is Buffy still truly the slayer or not? IUpdate should be up tomorrow, err later today since it's past 12. I know i said Wednesday but i was getting ready to go on vacation but once i'm there i will post. it's written i just need to make edits. Thanks again for your support!
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Kindleflame
Great chapter! I am not sorry about Lana at all! Good riddance!

Buffy needs to practice her heat vision to get the hang of it. Clark on the show was able to master it within a day. It should be the same way for Buffy to.

I can't wait to see what other powers Buffy develops next. Super/Ice breath perhaps? That would be cool! (grins at lame pun)

We have yet to see if Buffy is stronger then Clark because of being the slayer. I have a feeling she is. Please say I am! :)

Tootles! :D
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad to know people aren't too upset over Lana. I just felt as if she would get in the way since so much of everything revolved around Clark's crush on her. Plus she was a total drama queen and always the damsel in distress so she had to go. Buffy is going to get more powers before Clark, in the close to immediate future meaning when i update later today or tomorrow. She'll also practice her heat vision, but it was too hard in the midst of an apocalypse. And get ready for a great fight scene between them which will show off each of their own powers.
Review By [Kindleflame] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from weap
you made a typo in name cause i kept on looking for willow lol
but overall its good xD
sad that you have to turn lana :(
but than again i never have that much love for her ^_^;
Comments from author:
thanks so much for the review and i'm glad you liked it! I'm going to go back and edit that to change the willow part. I took parts of the Buffy transcript and must have skipped that part. And again sorry about Lana, but so much of Smallville revolved around Clark's crush on her so it was easier to kill her off. She always annoyed me anyway.
Again thanks for reading!
Review By [weap] • Date [9 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Knightmare
I hope you update soon. I haven't forgotten about this story. I hope you haven't either. (lol) Take care.
Comments from author:
I promise i havent forgotten this story. School ended and i planned to write, but then i've been dealing with a lot of family issues and have not had time to do anything and have barely even been near a computer to write. I promise to write and update as soon as everything settles down and i get the chance to. Sorry for the wait
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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