just read your story I loved it 100% you made mention of a possible sequel is that something that is still in the makes ??? hope it is because you have a very creative way of writing.
Review By [necha] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
That was very good! I loved the way you slowly revealed the situation, and Buffy's downwards spiral to rock bottom. Superb. You made her believably a victim without taking away her defiant nature, or making her weak. I hope you write that sequel!
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Sorry for not leaving a review in a timely manner; I honestly thought I'd done it already. :(
First off, I loved this whole story -- I thought it was creative and brilliant, and I loved the dialogue. Good job on the characterizations, too.
In terms of the final chapter, well, Quinn's heart is obviously in the right place, but man oh man he is *bad* about making decisions for other people. Taking away other people's agency is seriously uncool, no matter what your motives. I thought Buffy's reaction to Quinn trying to protect her that way was spot on, when she said she'd maybe forgive him one day.
Anyway, this was a powerful final chapter to a powerful story. Great work on everything!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Finally got caught up on this and I loved every moment! A very dark, heartbreaking but very *real* lesson for Buffy to learn. Wonderful job, Akat. I'm looking forward to the sequel. :)
Review By [SweetChi] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Good ending! and I hope that 75% goes up to 100% sure soon. because I need more of this. I want to know how she gets along in this world. Will she lead a relatively normal life, or will she be the supernatural magnet she normally is?
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Can't wait for the sequel this story is awesome. I hope that you don't bring in any other BTVS characters seeing Buffy being on her own is great. I can't wait to see how she survives out side of the Pit. I like how you make her strong but still struggles with the vampires of this dimension.
Review By [AnnManga] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Not Rated
I hope you write a sequel, because you left me hanging......and I need to know what happened!!!!!!!! Does Quinn survive? Does Buffy get a hand in taking down Victor? I must KNOW!!!! Lol.
Review By [aidensmom] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm devestated that this is over. I will be eargerly awaiting a squeal and I just want to give you a round of applause for that awesome story *huge crowd clapping and wolf whistling entusiatiscally*
Review By [slatergirl] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Not Rated
I've been so bad about reviewing this, but I was serious what I was saying before. This is such a great story, akat. You've done a fantastic job of putting Buffy in a situation where she has to change and adapt in order to survive, and how she realizes at the end that surviving isn't the same as living. I love this entire story and can't wait to read the sequel!
Review By [kerrykhat] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Well, at least she has a little money to start with. No ID. She should still check (internet/phone books etc) to see if there's a Joyce / Buffy Summers in this world, things like that. You of course have to do a sequel. It's a rule or something. 15 years later?! So she'd be 32? I sure hope slayers don't age. Actually come to think of it, they might not--none have ever lived that long before. I think 25 is the max any has ever gotten to. Anyway. Sookie might get a real surprise on reading her mind....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Not Rated
You take pleasure in torturing your fans, don't you? Whyyyyy??? Whyyyy?? I want them to make slaying tiger babies!!!! And omg "The Lady or The Tiger" comment...... Omg!!!! I must have sequel! I must!
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Not Rated